On Thu, Oct 29, 2015 at 8:10 PM, Bill <anotherdrunken...@gmail.com> wrote: > On 10/29/2015 7:16 AM, Bruce Walker wrote: >> >> This is another shot from my first work with art model Dorrie Mack, >> back in May. (It's actually work-safe unless you squint real hard.) >> >> https://www.flickr.com/photos/bruce_m_walker/22533038336/lightbox/ >> >> K-3, DA* 55/1.4, f:2.2, 1/100th sec, 100 ISO. >> >> One light source, daylight. I positioned her in the open mouth of a >> black v-flat (4x8' sheets of foam core) at right angles to the very >> large studio windows. >> >> Comments welcome! >> > > Truly she is squint worthy. > There is just so much goodness in this image it's hard to start. Her hair is > just sort of there, tousled a little bit, which I am afraid, my friend, > distracts greatly. But then the viewer is drawn to, and then drawn into her > beautiful eyes, The light is nicely directional, but just a bit too bright > for my taste. Tearing oneself reluctantly away from her eyes, the viewer > glides languorously down her right cheek, and comes to rest on what has to > be as close to perfect lips as can be found, with just a hint of a natural > pout. > Eventually, one must consider the rest of the image, and look past her chin, > both strong and determined, but at the same time soft and alluring. > Her shoulder is a bit rounded, it looks great from the front, a teeny bit > odd at her back. I think either turning her a teeny bit left, or moving you > a smidgen to the left to cover the little bit of her back that is visible. > The torn sweater is a really good prop, the gratuitous nipple is > unnecessary, but appreciated. > Thank you for sharing this one.
You are most welcome, Bill. Thank you for a very entertaining appreciation and critique! :) -- -bmw -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
