Nice. Love her look. Like the nipple, but I get a sense that the photo works too hard to reveal it.
Paul via phone > On Nov 7, 2015, at 3:36 PM, Bruce Walker <bruce.wal...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> On Thu, Oct 29, 2015 at 8:10 PM, Bill <anotherdrunken...@gmail.com> wrote: >>> On 10/29/2015 7:16 AM, Bruce Walker wrote: >>> >>> This is another shot from my first work with art model Dorrie Mack, >>> back in May. (It's actually work-safe unless you squint real hard.) >>> >>> https://www.flickr.com/photos/bruce_m_walker/22533038336/lightbox/ >>> >>> K-3, DA* 55/1.4, f:2.2, 1/100th sec, 100 ISO. >>> >>> One light source, daylight. I positioned her in the open mouth of a >>> black v-flat (4x8' sheets of foam core) at right angles to the very >>> large studio windows. >>> >>> Comments welcome! >> >> Truly she is squint worthy. >> There is just so much goodness in this image it's hard to start. Her hair is >> just sort of there, tousled a little bit, which I am afraid, my friend, >> distracts greatly. But then the viewer is drawn to, and then drawn into her >> beautiful eyes, The light is nicely directional, but just a bit too bright >> for my taste. Tearing oneself reluctantly away from her eyes, the viewer >> glides languorously down her right cheek, and comes to rest on what has to >> be as close to perfect lips as can be found, with just a hint of a natural >> pout. >> Eventually, one must consider the rest of the image, and look past her chin, >> both strong and determined, but at the same time soft and alluring. >> Her shoulder is a bit rounded, it looks great from the front, a teeny bit >> odd at her back. I think either turning her a teeny bit left, or moving you >> a smidgen to the left to cover the little bit of her back that is visible. >> The torn sweater is a really good prop, the gratuitous nipple is >> unnecessary, but appreciated. >> Thank you for sharing this one. > > You are most welcome, Bill. Thank you for a very entertaining > appreciation and critique! :) > > -- > -bmw > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
