Dan,
I have a thought regarding the composition I'd pass along, but if you tell me
you don't care what I think, I'll understand.
The feeling persists that this scene is heavily weighted to the right.
Were you to move the camera a short ways to your right and thereby allow the 
foreground geology to move a shade to your left, I feel it would be a much more 
comfortable scene.

J

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http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=18177905&size=lg
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Comments invited.

Dan Matyola
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola

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