The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the fence
is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just say that it
isn't that there is an object on the far right (the truck) but that the
truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence look like they
could be from an earlier time.
Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards? would like to
see that
ann
On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of
interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might try
a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one with just
the truck and no fence. Without one or the other I don't think there
is enough going on in the image.
Mark
On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:
Great sky.
I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some
quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and
passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.)
I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say
crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not without
cloning.)
Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)
On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
or on flickr:
https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.
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