The barn placement troubles me. It must be the strong color and near center location. The insignificant wire fence has no role and the far elements fail to supply the necessary weight to count them as points of interest. Admit having looked at this only on my cell.
J Sent from my iPhone > On Jul 3, 2017, at 4:10 PM, ann sanfedele <[email protected]> wrote: > > The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the fence is > fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just say that it isn't > that there is an object on the far right (the truck) but that the truck is > too modern looking - the barn and the fence look like they could be from an > earlier time. > Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards? would like to see that > > ann > >> On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote: >> Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of >> interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might try a shot >> with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one with just the truck >> and no fence. Without one or the other I don't think there is enough going >> on in the image. >> >> Mark >> >> >> >>> On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote: >>> Great sky. >>> >>> I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some quibbles. >>> Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and passing truck isn't >>> pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.) >>> >>> I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say crop it, >>> but don't think it can be done now. At least not without cloning.) >>> >>> Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-) >>> >>>> On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote: >>>> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago >>>> and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday - >>>> >>>> http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana >>>> >>>> or on flickr: >>>> >>>> https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/ >>>> >>>> K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
