Hi Ann -
I goofed up my reply to this to the list - so here it is again -
alternate crop of the photo with the dark cloud in the upper left
removed:
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana-alternate-crop?blog=9
Mark
-----------------------------------------From: "Mark C"
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Subject: Re: PESO - Down In Indiana
On 7/4/2017 8:42 AM, ann sanfedele wrote:
> Mark - I think you misunderstood... when I said the sky is is the
> thing for me, I meant the sky _makes_ the photo... don't you go
messin
> with that sky :-)
> in my eye, that is the center of interest
>
> ann
>
> On 7/3/2017 11:55 PM, Mark C wrote:
>> Thanks Ann. Coming back to this image tonight I'm seeing the dark
>> clouds in the upper left to be a problem - competing for the
center
>> of interest but also not so much conveying the sense of the
>> approaching storm. (I was blowing like mad when I took the shot so
in
>> my mind the sense of the storm coming up is very real, but I'm not
>> just looking at the photo.) But the only way to mitigate the cloud
is
>> to go to a weird crop, like 16:9....
>>
>> Mark
>>
>> On 7/3/2017 7:10 PM, ann sanfedele wrote:
>>> The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the
>>> fence is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just
say
>>> that it isn't that there is an object on the far right (the
truck)
>>> but that the truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence
>>> look like they could be from an earlier time.
>>> Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards? would like
>>> to see that
>>>
>>> ann
>>>
>>> On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
>>>> Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers
of
>>>> interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I
might
>>>> try a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one
>>>> with just the truck and no fence. Without one or the other I
don't
>>>> think there is enough going on in the image.
>>>>
>>>> Mark
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:
>>>>> Great sky.
>>>>>
>>>>> I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have
some
>>>>> quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence
and
>>>>> passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not
>>>>> sure.)
>>>>>
>>>>> I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd
say
>>>>> crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not
without
>>>>> cloning.)
>>>>>
>>>>> Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)
>>>>>
>>>>> On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
>>>>>> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few
hours
>>>>>> ago
>>>>>> and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday
-
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
/> >>>>>>
>>>>>> or on flickr:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
/> >>>>>>
>>>>>> K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>>
>>
>>
>
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