Hi, Here are my review comments for v27-0001.

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contrib/test_decoding/expected/generated_columns.out
contrib/test_decoding/sql/generated_columns.sql

+-- By default, 'include-generated-columns' is enabled, so the values
for the generated column 'b' will be replicated even if it is not
explicitly specified.

nit - The "default" is only like this for "test_decoding" (e.g., the
CREATE SUBSCRIPTION option is the opposite), so let's make the comment
clearer about that.
nit - Use sentence case in the comments.

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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia
diff --git a/contrib/test_decoding/expected/generated_columns.out 
b/contrib/test_decoding/expected/generated_columns.out
index 48f900f..9b03f6d 100644
--- a/contrib/test_decoding/expected/generated_columns.out
+++ b/contrib/test_decoding/expected/generated_columns.out
@@ -1,13 +1,14 @@
--- test decoding of generated columns
+-- Test decoding of generated columns.
 SELECT 'init' FROM pg_create_logical_replication_slot('regression_slot', 
'test_decoding');
  ?column? 
 ----------
  init
 (1 row)
 
--- column b' is a generated column
+-- Column b' is a generated column.
 CREATE TABLE gencoltable (a int, b int GENERATED ALWAYS AS (a * 2) STORED);
--- By default, 'include-generated-columns' is enabled, so the values for the 
generated column 'b' will be replicated even if it is not explicitly specified.
+-- For 'test_decoding' the parameter 'include-generated-columns' is enabled by 
default,
+-- so the values for the generated column 'b' will be replicated even if it is 
not explicitly specified.
 INSERT INTO gencoltable (a) VALUES (1);
 SELECT data FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 
'include-xids', '0', 'skip-empty-xacts', '1');
                             data                             
@@ -17,7 +18,7 @@ SELECT data FROM 
pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 'inc
  COMMIT
 (3 rows)
 
--- when 'include-generated-columns' is enabled, the values of the generated 
column 'b' will be replicated.
+-- When 'include-generated-columns' is enabled, the values of the generated 
column 'b' will be replicated.
 INSERT INTO gencoltable (a) VALUES (2);
 SELECT data FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 
'include-xids', '0', 'skip-empty-xacts', '1', 'include-generated-columns', '1');
                             data                             
@@ -27,7 +28,7 @@ SELECT data FROM 
pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 'inc
  COMMIT
 (3 rows)
 
--- when 'include-generated-columns' is disabled, the values of the generated 
column 'b' will not be replicated.
+-- When 'include-generated-columns' is disabled, the values of the generated 
column 'b' will not be replicated.
 INSERT INTO gencoltable (a) VALUES (3);
 SELECT data FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 
'include-xids', '0', 'skip-empty-xacts', '1', 'include-generated-columns', '0');
                       data                      
@@ -37,7 +38,7 @@ SELECT data FROM 
pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 'inc
  COMMIT
 (3 rows)
 
--- with REPLICA IDENTITY = FULL, to show old-key data includes generated 
columns data for updates.
+-- When REPLICA IDENTITY = FULL, show old-key data includes generated columns 
data for updates.
 ALTER TABLE gencoltable REPLICA IDENTITY FULL;
 UPDATE gencoltable SET a = 10;
 SELECT data FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 
'include-xids', '0', 'skip-empty-xacts', '1', 'include-generated-columns', '1');
diff --git a/contrib/test_decoding/sql/generated_columns.sql 
b/contrib/test_decoding/sql/generated_columns.sql
index fb156c2..7b455a1 100644
--- a/contrib/test_decoding/sql/generated_columns.sql
+++ b/contrib/test_decoding/sql/generated_columns.sql
@@ -1,23 +1,24 @@
--- test decoding of generated columns
+-- Test decoding of generated columns.
 
 SELECT 'init' FROM pg_create_logical_replication_slot('regression_slot', 
'test_decoding');
 
--- column b' is a generated column
+-- Column b' is a generated column.
 CREATE TABLE gencoltable (a int, b int GENERATED ALWAYS AS (a * 2) STORED);
 
--- By default, 'include-generated-columns' is enabled, so the values for the 
generated column 'b' will be replicated even if it is not explicitly specified.
+-- For 'test_decoding' the parameter 'include-generated-columns' is enabled by 
default,
+-- so the values for the generated column 'b' will be replicated even if it is 
not explicitly specified.
 INSERT INTO gencoltable (a) VALUES (1);
 SELECT data FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 
'include-xids', '0', 'skip-empty-xacts', '1');
 
--- when 'include-generated-columns' is enabled, the values of the generated 
column 'b' will be replicated.
+-- When 'include-generated-columns' is enabled, the values of the generated 
column 'b' will be replicated.
 INSERT INTO gencoltable (a) VALUES (2);
 SELECT data FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 
'include-xids', '0', 'skip-empty-xacts', '1', 'include-generated-columns', '1');
 
--- when 'include-generated-columns' is disabled, the values of the generated 
column 'b' will not be replicated.
+-- When 'include-generated-columns' is disabled, the values of the generated 
column 'b' will not be replicated.
 INSERT INTO gencoltable (a) VALUES (3);
 SELECT data FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 
'include-xids', '0', 'skip-empty-xacts', '1', 'include-generated-columns', '0');
 
--- with REPLICA IDENTITY = FULL, to show old-key data includes generated 
columns data for updates.
+-- When REPLICA IDENTITY = FULL, show old-key data includes generated columns 
data for updates.
 ALTER TABLE gencoltable REPLICA IDENTITY FULL;
 UPDATE gencoltable SET a = 10;
 SELECT data FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('regression_slot', NULL, NULL, 
'include-xids', '0', 'skip-empty-xacts', '1', 'include-generated-columns', '1');

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