On Oct 16, 2013, at 4:32 AM, [email protected] wrote: >> >> >> >> > Stef, > > A few weeks back I had occasion to review the Pharo Vision document again. > In the process of adding an additional Use-Case, I ended up marking lots of > small editorial improvements throughout the document. My focus was not on > eliminating grammar mistakes by non-native-english authors (it was pretty > good) - but more on trying to find the 'best' way to phrase something. > Eliminating the sort of things that creep into my own writing until the third > or fourth review, along the lines of that saying about the writing process... > "The job is not done until there is nothing left to remove" > > cheers -ben > <pharovision-btc-markup-2013-09-11.pdf>
very nice! Thanks!
I will make a pass to integrate your suggestions.
Marcus
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