marcus I went up to chpater 4 I guess then my hd crashed On Oct 16, 2013, at 7:46 AM, Marcus Denker <[email protected]> wrote:
> > On Oct 16, 2013, at 4:32 AM, [email protected] wrote: >>> >>> >>> >>> >> Stef, >> >> A few weeks back I had occasion to review the Pharo Vision document again. >> In the process of adding an additional Use-Case, I ended up marking lots of >> small editorial improvements throughout the document. My focus was not on >> eliminating grammar mistakes by non-native-english authors (it was pretty >> good) - but more on trying to find the 'best' way to phrase something. >> Eliminating the sort of things that creep into my own writing until the >> third or fourth review, along the lines of that saying about the writing >> process... "The job is not done until there is nothing left to remove" >> >> cheers -ben >> <pharovision-btc-markup-2013-09-11.pdf> > > very nice! Thanks! > > I will make a pass to integrate your suggestions. > > Marcus
