On 05/10/10 03:19 PM, Stephen Hahn wrote:
* Brock Pytlik<[email protected]>  [2010-05-10 15:07]:
Can I get someone to look over the man page changes?
  359      -          With -p, perform the search and display the packages 
which contain
  360      -          at least one action which matched the query.  This is 
equivalent to
  361      -          enclosing the entire query with '<>'.  (For a description 
of the
  362      -          '<>' operator, please see below.)
       359 +          With -p, display packages which have some actions to 
match each
360 + query term. This is equivalent to putting '<>' around each term
       361 +          in the query.  (For a description of the '<>' operator, 
please
       362 +          see below.)

  359.  "to" ->  "that"?

  360.  "This is" ->  "Using this option is"?

Those work for me. Thanks for taking a look.
Brock
  - Stephen


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