The first opening paragraph to me appears to be a run-on sentence. I think if you add a semi-colon to break it up, it might read better.
Regards, Chuck Regards, Chuck On Mon, Dec 8, 2014 at 12:52 PM, Chuck Hogg <ch...@shelbybb.com> wrote: > Forbes had originally used the incorrect email for promotions. I fixed in > this forward, continue discussion here please. > > Regards, > Chuck > > On Mon, Dec 8, 2014 at 12:28 PM, Forbes Mercy < > forbes.me...@wabroadband.com> wrote: > >> Here is your opportunity to suggest changes, point out typos, etc. This >> does go out today. >> >> Thanks, >> Forbes >> ---------- Forwarded message ---------- >> From: Suzanne Urash <suza...@cre8groupinc.com> >> Date: Dec 8, 2014 8:58 AM >> Subject: Advocacy Day Press Release >> To: forbes.me...@wabroadband.com >> Cc: ebow...@aristotle.net >> >> Hi Forbes, >> >> >> >> Attached is the draft press release that Elizabeth and I worked on for >> distribution today. Could you please let me know if you have any edits? We >> may want to send it around to Alex, Chuck and Steve to get their feedback >> as well. >> >> >> >> Thanks! >> >> Sue >> >> >> >> >> >> [image: Social] >> <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=dc3c8f95-62f2-44b9-b2c6-a300ddc054c7> >> >> [image: Social] >> <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=4dbb7fad-27ad-4a76-b85e-b10cd04d8c34> >> >> [image: Social] >> <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=ca493b42-2b13-4ac7-8aa0-962ef8fed7b5> >> >> [image: Social] >> <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=b7d227bc-dcd4-4377-b0a0-d52480ceb410> >> >> [image: Logo] >> <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=10&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=90c19de6-4c2f-4cdb-8056-d385843ce886> >> >> [image: >> https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/line.png] >> >> *S**uzanne** U**rash* >> *President* >> Office: 813.649.8504 >> Mobile: 813.220.5512 >> >> [image: >> https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/line.png] >> >> [image: >> https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/icon-blog.png] >> >> *FROM OUR BLOG:* >> >> WISPA Asks FCC To Reconsider Progeny Decision read more... >> <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=9&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&WebLinkID=f5a603fe-e916-4312-9373-fcf785df578f> >> >> [image: >> https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetSignatureReadImage.ashx?UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb] >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Board mailing list >> bo...@wispa.org >> http://lists.wispa.org/mailman/listinfo/board >> >> >
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