I'm definitely not the specialist at this, so if that's the norm I'm fine with it.
Regards, Chuck On Mon, Dec 8, 2014 at 1:04 PM, Suzanne Urash <suza...@cre8groupinc.com> wrote: > The opening paragraph complies with AP and PR standards but if you want to > reword the sentence beginning with “met with…” > > > > > > [image: Social] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=bc83603c-7cf7-43ba-b9a9-4dedb025b224&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=dc3c8f95-62f2-44b9-b2c6-a300ddc054c7> > > [image: Social] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=bc83603c-7cf7-43ba-b9a9-4dedb025b224&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=4dbb7fad-27ad-4a76-b85e-b10cd04d8c34> > > [image: Social] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=bc83603c-7cf7-43ba-b9a9-4dedb025b224&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=ca493b42-2b13-4ac7-8aa0-962ef8fed7b5> > > [image: Social] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=bc83603c-7cf7-43ba-b9a9-4dedb025b224&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=b7d227bc-dcd4-4377-b0a0-d52480ceb410> > > [image: Logo] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=10&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=bc83603c-7cf7-43ba-b9a9-4dedb025b224&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=90c19de6-4c2f-4cdb-8056-d385843ce886> > > [image: > https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/line.png] > > *S**uzanne** U**rash* > *President* > Office: 813.649.8504 > Mobile: 813.220.5512 > > [image: > https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/line.png] > > [image: > https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/icon-blog.png] > > *FROM OUR BLOG:* > > > > WISPA Asks FCC To Reconsider Progeny Decision read more... > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=9&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=bc83603c-7cf7-43ba-b9a9-4dedb025b224&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&WebLinkID=f5a603fe-e916-4312-9373-fcf785df578f> > > [image: > https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetSignatureReadImage.ashx?UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=bc83603c-7cf7-43ba-b9a9-4dedb025b224&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb] > > *From:* promotion-boun...@wispa.org [mailto:promotion-boun...@wispa.org] *On > Behalf Of *Chuck Hogg > *Sent:* Monday, December 8, 2014 12:53 PM > *To:* WISPA Board Members List; WISPA Promotion Committee > *Subject:* Re: [WISPA Promotion] [Board] Fwd: Advocacy Day Press Release > > > > The first opening paragraph to me appears to be a run-on sentence. I > think if you add a semi-colon to break it up, it might read better. > > > > > Regards, > Chuck > > > > > Regards, > Chuck > > > > On Mon, Dec 8, 2014 at 12:52 PM, Chuck Hogg <ch...@shelbybb.com> wrote: > > Forbes had originally used the incorrect email for promotions. I fixed in > this forward, continue discussion here please. > > > Regards, > Chuck > > > > On Mon, Dec 8, 2014 at 12:28 PM, Forbes Mercy < > forbes.me...@wabroadband.com> wrote: > > Here is your opportunity to suggest changes, point out typos, etc. This > does go out today. > > Thanks, > Forbes > > ---------- Forwarded message ---------- > From: Suzanne Urash <suza...@cre8groupinc.com> > Date: Dec 8, 2014 8:58 AM > Subject: Advocacy Day Press Release > To: forbes.me...@wabroadband.com > Cc: ebow...@aristotle.net > > Hi Forbes, > > > > Attached is the draft press release that Elizabeth and I worked on for > distribution today. Could you please let me know if you have any edits? We > may want to send it around to Alex, Chuck and Steve to get their feedback > as well. > > > > Thanks! > > Sue > > > > > > [image: Social] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=dc3c8f95-62f2-44b9-b2c6-a300ddc054c7> > > [image: Social] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=4dbb7fad-27ad-4a76-b85e-b10cd04d8c34> > > [image: Social] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=ca493b42-2b13-4ac7-8aa0-962ef8fed7b5> > > [image: Social] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=5&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=b7d227bc-dcd4-4377-b0a0-d52480ceb410> > > [image: Logo] > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=10&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&IconID=90c19de6-4c2f-4cdb-8056-d385843ce886> > > [image: > https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/line.png] > > *S**uzanne** U**rash* > *President* > Office: 813.649.8504 > Mobile: 813.220.5512 > > > > [image: > https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/line.png] > > [image: > https://www.sigbop.com/images/enterprise/companybranding/transbeam/icon-blog.png] > > *FROM OUR BLOG:* > > WISPA Asks FCC To Reconsider Progeny Decision read more... > <https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetClick.ashx?ClickTypeID=9&UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb&WebLinkID=f5a603fe-e916-4312-9373-fcf785df578f> > > [image: > https://www.sigbop.com/Signature/GetSignatureReadImage.ashx?UserID=de065551-2113-42fb-a0aa-bddd0a140bc2&TrackingID=93c4febb-5c65-4a56-9a06-67950ac1e2f7&SignatureID=a8393486-b5b7-4cb3-8a6e-242e43042afb] > > > > _______________________________________________ > Board mailing list > bo...@wispa.org > http://lists.wispa.org/mailman/listinfo/board > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Promotion mailing list > Promotion@wispa.org > http://lists.wispa.org/mailman/listinfo/promotion > >
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