Todd Lipcon has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: [docs] Add security guide
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Patch Set 1:

(9 comments)

added some notes. will take on doing another rev of this

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6479/1/docs/security.adoc
File docs/security.adoc:

PS1, Line 38: amongst
"among"


PS1, Line 40: gaining access to Kudu
maybe add something like "and securely identifies the connecting user for the 
purposes of authorization decisions" or somesuch


Line 48: but will allow unauthenticated connections. When `disabled`, Kudu will 
only
perhaps add a 'NOTE' section saying something about how the 'optional' 
authentication is meant for transitional usage


PS1, Line 51: 1000's
"thousands"


Line 56: TLS/PKI certificates to servers, and temporary authentication tokens 
to clients.
maybe better to move the scalability section down below the explanation of PKI


Line 60: Kudu uses an internal PKI system to issue certificate credentials to 
servers in
specify X509


PS1, Line 72: ,
            : see <<known-limitations>> for more information.
punctuation


PS1, Line 78: when authenticating
to authenticate


PS1, Line 95: amongst
among


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