Todd Lipcon has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: [docs] Add security guide
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(20 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6479/1/docs/security.adoc
File docs/security.adoc:

Line 31: access from unwanted users. This guide will explain the security 
features
> change to 'unauthorized users'?
Done


PS1, Line 38: amongst
> "among"
Done


PS1, Line 40: gaining access to Kudu
> maybe add something like "and securely identifies the connecting user for t
Done


Line 48: but will allow unauthenticated connections. When `disabled`, Kudu will 
only
> perhaps add a 'NOTE' section saying something about how the 'optional' auth
Done


PS1, Line 51: 1000's
> "thousands"
Done


PS1, Line 54: Master
> We don't usually capitalize this, IIRC.
Done


Line 60: Kudu uses an internal PKI system to issue certificate credentials to 
servers in
> specify X509
Done


PS1, Line 67: internally issued
> nit: internally-issued
Done


PS1, Line 72: ,
            : see <<known-limitations>> for more information.
> punctuation
actually decided to remove this since it's user-facing docs and "in the future" 
is too fuzzy


PS1, Line 78: when authenticating
> to authenticate
Done


PS1, Line 80: For the most
            : part
> Is there any circumstances under which a token is NOT transparent? If no, t
there are some cases (eg when writing integrations with things like 
spark/impala/drill/etc) where people may need to care, so leaving it. But I 
don't want to explain the details here since it may distract from the overall 
docs.


Line 110: web UI HTTPS configuration.
> do we need to mention http basic authentication is also supported, even tho
I noticed that the webserver_password_file flag is not marked as 'stable' yet 
so I think we should avoid documenting it until it is. Do you mind doing 
another patch for 1.4 which marks them as stable and adds docs?


Line 113: be redacted. (TODO: explain how to turn this off). Table metadata, 
such as table
> @Todd, looking at logging.h , just realized we are using the same value of 
yea, I think that's a mistake though since you added the ability to group. 
Let's not document for now and later switch it to a separate 'web' flag.


PS1, Line 115: disabled setting
> disabled by setting
Done


Line 142: # OR, turn off the web UI entirely.
> Would be nice to reformat to emphasize this OR is vs. all of the --webserve
Done


PS1, Line 152: some
> extra some
Done


PS1, Line 156: Long-lived Tokens:: Kudu clients do not yet automatically 
request fresh tokens
             : after initial token expiration, so long-lived clients in secure 
clusters are not
             : supported.
> Does this affect Impala? Or is the lifespan of a Kudu client scoped to an i
Done


PS1, Line 163: externally issued
> externally-issued
Done


PS1, Line 166: Fine-grained Authorization:: Kudu does not have the ability to 
restrict access
             : based on operation type or target (table, column, etc).
> This is the first I'm seeing about authz; I take it some documentation on "
Done


Line 172: Web UI Authentication:: The Kudu web UI lacks authentication, so 
individual
> At least we support http basic authentication, do we need to be more specif
see above, I think we should mark it stable before documenting?


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