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Change subject: [blog] a blogpost about location awareness in Kudu
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http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md
File _posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md:

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PS4, Line 50:
the


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PS4, Line 55: location string for the specified IP address/hostname.
            : The
Is this meant to be a paragraph break?


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PS4, Line 61: try
to try


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PS4, Line 61: the replica
replicas


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@62
PS4, Line 62: if
Remove.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@62
PS4, Line 62: keep
to keep


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@64
PS4, Line 64: as well
Remove, or remove "Also".


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PS4, Line 65: about to connect to the closest tablet server
I'd say "attempt to read from the closest tablet server" since that's all we 
actually use it for.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@67
PS4, Line 67: The Kudu leader master assigns location for a client when it 
connects to a
            : cluster. The assigned location string is sent back from the 
leader master
            : to the client along with other cluster-specific information.
This is redundant with the previous paragraph.


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PS4, Line 84:
a


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PS4, Line 92: placement policies
I prefer to say "placement policy" singular since we only have one. Also I 
think you ought to define the placement policy here (i.e. restate the "use 
case" from the beginning as the placement policy).


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@94
PS4, Line 94: The automatic re-replication and the initial placement of new 
replicas both
            : attempt to spread replicas across locations so that the failure 
of tablet
            : servers in one location does not make tablets unavailable.
This is basically the placement policy, so I'd just make it clear that 
"placement policy" is referring to this condition.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@101
PS4, Line 101: policies
Here and below, like I said, I prefer "policy" since we have just one.


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PS4, Line 139: location
each location


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@142
PS4, Line 142: Examples
This section is really nice. Thanks for adding it.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@147
PS4, Line 147: squares
nit: rectangles or boxes


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/12119/4/_posts/2018-12-20-location-awareness.md@181
PS4, Line 181: result
resulting


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PS4, Line 188: land
receive



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