dongjoon-hyun commented on code in PR #45425:
URL: https://github.com/apache/spark/pull/45425#discussion_r1525398491


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docs/security.md:
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@@ -149,24 +149,32 @@ secret file agrees with the executors' secret file.
 
 # Network Encryption
 
-Spark supports two mutually exclusive forms of encryption for RPC connections.
+Spark supports two mutually exclusive forms of encryption for RPC connections:
 
-The first is an AES-based encryption which relies on a shared secret, and thus 
requires
-RPC authentication to also be enabled.
+The **preferred method** uses TLS (aka SSL) encryption via Netty's support for 
SSL. Enabling SSL
+requires keys and certificates to be properly configured. SSL is standardized 
and considered more
+secure.
 
-The second is an SSL based encryption mechanism utilizing Netty's support for 
SSL. This requires
-keys and certificates to be properly configured. It can be used with or 
without the authentication
-mechanism discussed earlier.
-
-One may prefer to use the SSL based encryption in scenarios where compliance 
mandates the usage
-of specific protocols; or to leverage the security of a more standard 
encryption library. However,
-the AES based encryption is simpler to configure and may be preferred if the 
only requirement
-is that data be encrypted in transit.
+The legacy method is an AES-based encryption mechanism relying on a shared 
secret. This requires
+RPC authentication to also be enabled. This method uses a bespoke protocol and 
should be considered
+deprecated in favor of SSL.
 
 If both options are enabled in the configuration, the SSL based RPC encryption 
takes precedence
 and the AES based encryption will not be used (and a warning message will be 
emitted).
 
-## AES based Encryption
+## SSL Encryption (Preferred)
+
+Spark supports SSL based encryption for RPC connections. Please refer to the 
SSL Configuration
+section below to understand how to configure it. The SSL settings are mostly 
similar across the UI
+and RPC, however there are a few additional settings which are specific to the 
RPC implementation.
+The RPC implementation uses Netty under the hood (while the UI uses Jetty), 
which supports a
+different set of options.
+
+Unlike the other SSL settings for the UI, the RPC SSL is *not* automatically 
enabled if

Review Comment:
   Since this layer is completely irrelevant to UI, we don't need to say like 
this. Shall we omit this paragraph?
   > Unlike the other SSL settings for the UI



##########
docs/security.md:
##########
@@ -149,24 +149,32 @@ secret file agrees with the executors' secret file.
 
 # Network Encryption
 
-Spark supports two mutually exclusive forms of encryption for RPC connections.
+Spark supports two mutually exclusive forms of encryption for RPC connections:
 
-The first is an AES-based encryption which relies on a shared secret, and thus 
requires
-RPC authentication to also be enabled.
+The **preferred method** uses TLS (aka SSL) encryption via Netty's support for 
SSL. Enabling SSL
+requires keys and certificates to be properly configured. SSL is standardized 
and considered more
+secure.
 
-The second is an SSL based encryption mechanism utilizing Netty's support for 
SSL. This requires
-keys and certificates to be properly configured. It can be used with or 
without the authentication
-mechanism discussed earlier.
-
-One may prefer to use the SSL based encryption in scenarios where compliance 
mandates the usage
-of specific protocols; or to leverage the security of a more standard 
encryption library. However,
-the AES based encryption is simpler to configure and may be preferred if the 
only requirement
-is that data be encrypted in transit.
+The legacy method is an AES-based encryption mechanism relying on a shared 
secret. This requires
+RPC authentication to also be enabled. This method uses a bespoke protocol and 
should be considered
+deprecated in favor of SSL.
 
 If both options are enabled in the configuration, the SSL based RPC encryption 
takes precedence
 and the AES based encryption will not be used (and a warning message will be 
emitted).
 
-## AES based Encryption
+## SSL Encryption (Preferred)
+
+Spark supports SSL based encryption for RPC connections. Please refer to the 
SSL Configuration
+section below to understand how to configure it. The SSL settings are mostly 
similar across the UI
+and RPC, however there are a few additional settings which are specific to the 
RPC implementation.
+The RPC implementation uses Netty under the hood (while the UI uses Jetty), 
which supports a
+different set of options.
+
+Unlike the other SSL settings for the UI, the RPC SSL is *not* automatically 
enabled if

Review Comment:
   Since this layer is completely irrelevant to UI, we don't need to say like 
this. Shall we omit this paragraph?
   > Unlike the other SSL settings for the UI



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