Hi Dhruv,

Thank you for the prompt feedback.
Please see inline.


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Date: 2024年10月17日 16:32
Subject: [Last-Call] Re: UDP Guidelines and draft-ietf-bfd-unaffiliated-echo-12


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Hi Xiao,




[XM]>>> I can add the reference to RFC 5082 back to this document, if no 
objection from Dhruv (who had that concern). Propose to change the text as 
below.
OLD


All Unaffiliated BFD Echo packets for the session MUST be sent with a Time to 
Live (TTL) or Hop Limit value of 255, and received with a TTL or Hop Limit 
value of 254, otherwise the received packets MUST be dropped.NEW
All Unaffiliated BFD Echo packets for the session MUST be sent with a Time to 
Live (TTL) or Hop Limit value of 255, and received with a TTL or Hop Limit 
value of 254, otherwise the received packets MUST be dropped ([RFC5082] 
Appendix A).END






Dhruv: I would have been happy with rephrasing the text in such a way that 
referencing 5082 made sense. Would this be better - 


"All Unaffiliated BFD Echo packets for the session MUST be sent with a Time to 
Live (TTL) or Hop Limit value of 255. Received packets MUST have a TTL or Hop 
Limit value of 254 (similar to Appendix A of [RFC5082] to verify against a 
configured number of hops); otherwise, the received packets MUST be 
dropped."[XM]>>> Yes, your text looks better to me. How about Jeff and Gorry?

Best Regards,
Xiao Min


Thanks! 
Dhruv




Cheers,
Xiao Min

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