> On 17 Oct 2024, at 09:45, [email protected] wrote:
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> Hi Dhruv,
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> 
> Thank you for the prompt feedback.
> Please see inline.
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> From: DhruvDhody <[email protected]>
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> Date: 2024年10月17日 16:32
> Subject: [Last-Call] Re: UDP Guidelines and 
> draft-ietf-bfd-unaffiliated-echo-12
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> Hi Xiao,
>> 
>> [XM]>>> I can add the reference to RFC 5082 back to this document, if no 
>> objection from Dhruv (who had that concern). Propose to change the text as 
>> below.
>> 
>> OLD
>> 
>> All Unaffiliated BFD Echo    packets for the session MUST be sent with a 
>> Time to Live (TTL) or Hop    Limit value of 255, and received with a TTL or 
>> Hop Limit value of    254, otherwise the received packets MUST be dropped.
>> NEW
>> 
>> All Unaffiliated BFD Echo    packets for the session MUST be sent with a 
>> Time to Live (TTL) or Hop    Limit value of 255, and received with a TTL or 
>> Hop Limit value of    254, otherwise the received packets MUST be dropped 
>> ([RFC5082] Appendix A).
>> END
>> 
>> 
>> 
> Dhruv: I would have been happy with rephrasing the text in such a way that 
> referencing 5082 made sense. Would this be better - 
> 
>> "All Unaffiliated BFD Echo packets for the session MUST be sent with a Time 
>> to Live (TTL) or Hop Limit value of 255. Received packets MUST have a TTL or 
>> Hop Limit value of 254 (similar to Appendix A of [RFC5082] to verify against 
>> a configured number of hops); otherwise, the received packets MUST be 
>> dropped."
> [XM]>>> Yes, your text looks better to me. How about Jeff and Gorry?
> 
> 
> 
I do think the addition of the reference helps. Thanks. 

This gives context and informs people who might like being creative with 
different ways to design this mechanism.

Gorry
> Best Regards,
> 
> Xiao Min
> 
> 
> 
> Thanks! 
> Dhruv
> 
>> Cheers,
>> 
>> Xiao Min
>> 
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