Hi Benoit, Thanks for the comments. We have updated the document to address these comments, in a new revision https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-09. Please check if this is ok.
Regards, - Xufeng > -----Original Message----- > From: Benoit Claise [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Tuesday, January 9, 2018 3:35 AM > To: The IESG <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; Yingzhen Qu > <[email protected]>; [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08: (with > COMMENT) > > Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > - I support Kathleen's DISCUSS. > > - I like the way sections 2.2 and 2.3 are constructed. Thanks. > In section 2.4 that's a pity that we don't see which per instance oper states > and > stats are available. > > +--ro <per instance operational states> > +--ro statistics > +--ro <per instance statistics> > > I have to refer to an appendix to find the answer > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08#appendix-A Why don't > you have the full tree as from the appendix in 2.X? > > - No need to include the WG chairs in the YANG module, as per 6087bis > > WG Chair: Jeff Tantsura > <mailto:[email protected]> > > WG Chair: Chris Bowers > <mailto:[email protected]> > > - The following two references must point to the working group documents > > [I-D.bjorklund-netmod-rfc7223bis] > Bjorklund, M., "A YANG Data Model for Interface > Management", draft-bjorklund-netmod-rfc7223bis-00 (work in > progress), August 2017. > > [I-D.bjorklund-netmod-rfc7277bis] > Bjorklund, M., "A YANG Data Model for IP Management", > draft-bjorklund-netmod-rfc7277bis-00 (work in progress), > August 2017. > > - Thanks for the appendix B. It's always useful. > Note: I have not validated the instance. > _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
