Thank you Xufeng,
Just one comment left:
I have to refer to an appendix to find the
answerhttps://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08#appendix-A
Why don't you have the full tree from the appendix in a new section 2.X?
Anyway, this is a comment, so up to the responsible AD to decide.
Regards, Benoit
Hi Benoit,
Thanks for the comments. We have updated the document to address these
comments, in a new revision
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-09. Please
check if this is ok.
Regards,
- Xufeng
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- I support Kathleen's DISCUSS.
- I like the way sections 2.2 and 2.3 are constructed. Thanks.
In section 2.4 that's a pity that we don't see which per instance oper states
and
stats are available.
+--ro <per instance operational states>
+--ro statistics
+--ro <per instance statistics>
I have to refer to an appendix to find the answer
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08#appendix-A Why don't
you have the full tree as from the appendix in 2.X?
- No need to include the WG chairs in the YANG module, as per 6087bis
WG Chair: Jeff Tantsura
<mailto:[email protected]>
WG Chair: Chris Bowers
<mailto:[email protected]>
- The following two references must point to the working group documents
[I-D.bjorklund-netmod-rfc7223bis]
Bjorklund, M., "A YANG Data Model for Interface
Management", draft-bjorklund-netmod-rfc7223bis-00 (work in
progress), August 2017.
[I-D.bjorklund-netmod-rfc7277bis]
Bjorklund, M., "A YANG Data Model for IP Management",
draft-bjorklund-netmod-rfc7277bis-00 (work in progress),
August 2017.
- Thanks for the appendix B. It's always useful.
Note: I have not validated the instance.
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