Hi Linda, I think your -32 version looks good. Suggest you accept changes and post it.
Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA [email protected] On Fri, Dec 15, 2023 at 9:40 PM Linda Dunbar <[email protected]> wrote: > Donald, > > Thank you very much all the editorial improvements. I have updated the > document per your suggestions. > > Please see the attached. > > Linda > > -----Original Message----- > From: Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> > Sent: Thursday, December 14, 2023 4:28 PM > To: Jeff Tantsura <[email protected]> > Cc: RTGWG <[email protected]>; rtgwg-chairs <[email protected]>; > [email protected] > Subject: Re: WGLC for draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement > > I support the publication of this draft after editorial improvements. see > attached for suggestions and editorial comments. > > Thanks, > Donald > =============================== > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA [email protected] > > > On Tue, Dec 5, 2023 at 4:44 PM Jeff Tantsura <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > Dear RTGWG, > > > > > > > > The authors have requested the RTGWG to last call the > > draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement > > draft. > > > > > > > > The authors have addressed all the comments received from the early > > reviews and shepherd (thanks Joel!). > > > > Please indicate support or no-support by December 20 2023. > > > > > > > > IPR: > > > > If you are listed as a document author or contributor and haven’t > > responded to the IPR call, please respond to this > > > > email of whether or not you are aware of any relevant IPR. > > > > The response needs to be sent to the RTGWG mailing list. > > > > The document will not advance to the next stage until a response has > > been received from each author and each individual that has contributed > to the document >
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