Re: [trill] Last Call: draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04.txt (Requirements for Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) in TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links)) to Informational RF
I totally agree with that tweak *sparkles* [RBridges MUST have the ability to distinguish OAM frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or require processing by the OAM plane.] Perfect *bow* gayle At 07:54 AM 12/19/2012, Donald Eastlake wrote: Hi Gayle, On Tue, Dec 11, 2012 at 7:43 PM, gayle noble wind...@skyhighway.com wrote: Very well written!! No spelling errors! No grammatical errors! Only one sentence, in my opinion, could be rephrased for clarity 4.1. Data Plane RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames destined for them or which require processing by the OAM plane from normal data frames. [Might be clearer if it was [RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or require processing by the OAM plane.]] Thanks for the praise! I think that your suggested wording could be improved by replacing the word identify with the word distinguish. Donald = Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com gayle
Re: [trill] Last Call: draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04.txt (Requirements for Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) in TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links)) to Informational RF
Hi Gayle, On Tue, Dec 11, 2012 at 7:43 PM, gayle noble wind...@skyhighway.com wrote: Very well written!! No spelling errors! No grammatical errors! Only one sentence, in my opinion, could be rephrased for clarity 4.1. Data Plane RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames destined for them or which require processing by the OAM plane from normal data frames. [Might be clearer if it was [RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or require processing by the OAM plane.]] Thanks for the praise! I think that your suggested wording could be improved by replacing the word identify with the word distinguish. Donald = Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com gayle
Re: [trill] Last Call: draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04.txt (Requirements for Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) in TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links)) to Informational RF
Very well written!! No spelling errors! No grammatical errors! Only one sentence, in my opinion, could be rephrased for clarity 4.1. Data Plane RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames destined for them or which require processing by the OAM plane from normal data frames. [Might be clearer if it was [RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or require processing by the OAM plane.]] gayle
