Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Rick Womer]

Better late than never?

I like this. One might brighten the window a bit, but I like the composition, 
the menu on the left, the pots... all very well seen and composed.

Rick

On Nov 27, 2015, at 1:44 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:

> Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).
> 
> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html
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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Boris Liberman]

Ken, I can hear you about the subject. I mean - having heard others :-).

But can you please explain in a sentence or two - what is it in the 
composition (or lack thereof) that does not work for you... I'd rather 
learn.


Boris


On 11/27/2015 23:40, Ken Waller wrote:
Looks to be well exposed, but the subject and composition don't work 
for me.


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- Original Message - From: "Boris Liberman" <bori...@gmail.com>
Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window



Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Boris Liberman]

Thank you for your kind words, Bulent.

I must say that the idea of trying to include shadow of a cook (or any 
one behind that window :-) ) did not occur to me. I should certainly 
keep it in mind next time...


Boris




On 11/27/2015 22:12, Bulent Celasun wrote:

Tonally, it is beautiful.
Compositionally, I might consider a closer, full-frontal view of the
window part.
More importantly, I feel that a human element (shadow of a cook
inside?) might also contribute.

Good to see you productive :)

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2015-11-27 20:44 GMT+02:00 Boris Liberman :

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http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Boris Liberman]

Jack, but don't you see - this is behind the window, indoors... No flies 
were spotted during taking this picture :-).


It is indeed the menu...

Boris


On 11/27/2015 23:28, Jack Davis wrote:

Can't help but wonder how many flies are examining the inside of those pots
at any one time. Kind of unappetizing.
Like the shot generally, along with the adjacent menu(?)

J

  



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Tonally, it is beautiful.
Compositionally, I might consider a closer, full-frontal view of the
window part.
More importantly, I feel that a human element (shadow of a cook
inside?) might also contribute.

Good to see you productive :)

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2015-11-27 20:44 GMT+02:00 Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com>:

Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Boris Liberman]

I am fascinated by the fact that more than one person indicated their 
dislike of potential hygienic issue here...


This is one of those small backstreet places in Tel Aviv that are 
usually quite good, really.


Boris


On 11/27/2015 23:33, ann sanfedele wrote:
Looks like a place one would not want to gointo toeat...  I like 
Bulent's suggestion of shooting it straight on, but there
are probably reasons like reflections or not being able to back up to 
a position where you could shoot straight on.  I'm wondering

if there is more to the story if one could read themenu.


ann

On 11/27/2015 1:44 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:

Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Boris Liberman]

Thanks, Ralf. Well, this is not Belgium, and even though Tel Aviv is 
rather not too kosher, this specific places serves salads, quiches and 
stuff like that. No seafood that I could see in the menu.


Boris


On 11/27/2015 23:53, Ralf R Radermacher wrote:

Am 27.11.15 um 19:44 schrieb Boris Liberman:

Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html


If this were in Belgium, with all the enameled pots in the window, I'd 
suppose they serve mussels. So, what's on the menu?


Oh, and I do like the photo.

Ralf




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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[ann sanfedele]

Well it was the disarray of the dishes that sent the red flag my way - 
or rather, might do so for others.

were the bowls and such neatly stacked it creates a different impression.

ann

On 11/28/2015 1:41 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:
I am fascinated by the fact that more than one person indicated their 
dislike of potential hygienic issue here...


This is one of those small backstreet places in Tel Aviv that are 
usually quite good, really.


Boris


On 11/27/2015 23:33, ann sanfedele wrote:
Looks like a place one would not want to gointo toeat...  I like 
Bulent's suggestion of shooting it straight on, but there
are probably reasons like reflections or not being able to back up to 
a position where you could shoot straight on.  I'm wondering

if there is more to the story if one could read themenu.


ann

On 11/27/2015 1:44 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:

Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Ken Waller]

The closeness of the window ledge to the bottom edge of the image and the 
inclusion of the strip (of wood ?) next to the menu on the LH side. Minor 
points but gives the feel of a snap as opposed to a crafted, thought out image.


-Original Message-
>From: Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com>
>Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
>
>Ken, I can hear you about the subject. I mean - having heard others :-).
>
>But can you please explain in a sentence or two - what is it in the 
>composition (or lack thereof) that does not work for you... I'd rather 
>learn.
>
>Boris
>
>
>On 11/27/2015 23:40, Ken Waller wrote:
>> Looks to be well exposed, but the subject and composition don't work 
>> for me.
>>
>> Kenneth Waller
>> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
>>
>> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Boris Liberman" <bori...@gmail.com>
>> Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
>>
>>
>>> Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).
>>>
>>> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html
>>>
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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Jack Davis]

Don't you mean; "no flies were injured during the taking of this picture?" ;0)
J

Sent from my iPhone

> On Nov 28, 2015, at 10:40 AM, Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Jack, but don't you see - this is behind the window, indoors... No flies were 
> spotted during taking this picture :-).
> 
> It is indeed the menu...
> 
> Boris
> 
> 
>> On 11/27/2015 23:28, Jack Davis wrote:
>> Can't help but wonder how many flies are examining the inside of those pots
>> at any one time. Kind of unappetizing.
>> Like the shot generally, along with the adjacent menu(?)
>> 
>> J
>> 
>>  
>> 
>> - Original Message -
>> From: "Bulent Celasun" <bulent.cela...@gmail.com>
>> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <pdml@pdml.net>
>> Sent: Friday, November 27, 2015 12:12:09 PM
>> Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
>> 
>> Tonally, it is beautiful.
>> Compositionally, I might consider a closer, full-frontal view of the
>> window part.
>> More importantly, I feel that a human element (shadow of a cook
>> inside?) might also contribute.
>> 
>> Good to see you productive :)
>> 
>> Bulent
>> 
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>> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/artists/bulentcelasun
>> 
>> 
>> 2015-11-27 20:44 GMT+02:00 Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com>:
>>> Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).
>>> 
>>> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html
>>> 
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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Boris Liberman]

Ken, I hear you. I must say that, I did not spend too much time on this 
shot, although this framing with all its deficiencies that you pointed 
out was entirely intentional...


Well. as I often say "we aim to please, sometimes we miss"...

Boris

On 11/28/2015 22:52, Ken Waller wrote:

The closeness of the window ledge to the bottom edge of the image and the 
inclusion of the strip (of wood ?) next to the menu on the LH side. Minor 
points but gives the feel of a snap as opposed to a crafted, thought out image.


-Original Message-

From: Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

Ken, I can hear you about the subject. I mean - having heard others :-).

But can you please explain in a sentence or two - what is it in the
composition (or lack thereof) that does not work for you... I'd rather
learn.

Boris


On 11/27/2015 23:40, Ken Waller wrote:

Looks to be well exposed, but the subject and composition don't work
for me.

Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller

- Original Message - From: "Boris Liberman" <bori...@gmail.com>
Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window



Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Boris Liberman]

Indeed, that would naturally follow from my statement of not spotting 
the flies. I can hardly injure a fly if I don't see it :-).


On 11/28/2015 22:06, Jack Davis wrote:

Don't you mean; "no flies were injured during the taking of this picture?" ;0)
J

Sent from my iPhone


On Nov 28, 2015, at 10:40 AM, Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com> wrote:

Jack, but don't you see - this is behind the window, indoors... No flies were 
spotted during taking this picture :-).

It is indeed the menu...

Boris



On 11/27/2015 23:28, Jack Davis wrote:
Can't help but wonder how many flies are examining the inside of those pots
at any one time. Kind of unappetizing.
Like the shot generally, along with the adjacent menu(?)

J

  


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Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

Tonally, it is beautiful.
Compositionally, I might consider a closer, full-frontal view of the
window part.
More importantly, I feel that a human element (shadow of a cook
inside?) might also contribute.

Good to see you productive :)

Bulent

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2015-11-27 20:44 GMT+02:00 Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com>:

Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

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Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Boris Liberman]

Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

Boris


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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Jack Davis]

Can't help but wonder how many flies are examining the inside of those pots
at any one time. Kind of unappetizing.
Like the shot generally, along with the adjacent menu(?)

J

 


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Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

Tonally, it is beautiful.
Compositionally, I might consider a closer, full-frontal view of the
window part.
More importantly, I feel that a human element (shadow of a cook
inside?) might also contribute.

Good to see you productive :)

Bulent

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> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html
>
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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Bulent Celasun]

Tonally, it is beautiful.
Compositionally, I might consider a closer, full-frontal view of the
window part.
More importantly, I feel that a human element (shadow of a cook
inside?) might also contribute.

Good to see you productive :)

Bulent

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2015-11-27 20:44 GMT+02:00 Boris Liberman :
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> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html
>
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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Ralf R Radermacher]

Am 27.11.15 um 19:44 schrieb Boris Liberman:

Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html


If this were in Belgium, with all the enameled pots in the window, I'd 
suppose they serve mussels. So, what's on the menu?


Oh, and I do like the photo.

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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[ann sanfedele]

Looks like a place one would not want to gointo toeat...  I like 
Bulent's suggestion of shooting it straight on, but there
are probably reasons like reflections or not being able to back up to a 
position where you could shoot straight on.  I'm wondering

if there is more to the story if one could read themenu.


ann

On 11/27/2015 1:44 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:

Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html

Boris





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Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window

[Ken Waller]

Looks to be well exposed, but the subject and composition don't work for me.

Kenneth Waller
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Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window



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