Re: PESO - Morning Study
That's better. You've also got the subject off-centre in that one. Miles better. Really nice actually. Chris On 15 September 2013 23:00, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote: Hmmm... I see what you mean about the bench, Chris. I've tried various crops on this pic, and they lose the feeling of solitude I was trying to convey. So, here is a different shot from the same series; tell me what you think. http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17528412size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17528412-lg.jpg Cheers, Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW - Original Message - From: Chris Mitchell chris.mitch...@which.net To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net Cc: Sent: Sunday, September 15, 2013 5:37 PM Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Chris On 15 September 2013 22:09, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote: Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Morning Study, take 2
Dave, See version 2 here: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17528412size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17528412-lg.jpg (Different shot, same shoot) Rick - Original Message - From: David Mann dmann...@gmail.com To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net Cc: Sent: Monday, September 16, 2013 1:13 AM Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study On Sep 16, 2013, at 9:37 AM, Chris Mitchell chris.mitch...@which.net wrote: Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Interesting, my first thought was the same sort of thing: crop out the bottom for a panoramic format. Cheers, Dave -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Morning Study
Yes, I think it well might be stronger cropped in the shape of a panoramic image. Dan Matyola http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola On Mon, Sep 16, 2013 at 1:13 AM, David Mann dmann...@gmail.com wrote: On Sep 16, 2013, at 9:37 AM, Chris Mitchell chris.mitch...@which.net wrote: Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Interesting, my first thought was the same sort of thing: crop out the bottom for a panoramic format. Cheers, Dave -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Morning Study
I like the first one better. Ain't nothing wrong with that bench on the right. On 9/15/2013 6:00 PM, Rick Womer wrote: Hmmm... I see what you mean about the bench, Chris. I've tried various crops on this pic, and they lose the feeling of solitude I was trying to convey. So, here is a different shot from the same series; tell me what you think. http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17528412size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17528412-lg.jpg Cheers, Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW - Original Message - From: Chris Mitchell chris.mitch...@which.net To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net Cc: Sent: Sunday, September 15, 2013 5:37 PM Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Chris On 15 September 2013 22:09, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote: Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: Re: PESO - Morning Study
I agree with Chris on the quality mood of the shot. Was the one with the umbrellas and the lady sitting by herself yours? It looks like a theme here. I do not mind the lower corner but if you cropped out the building from the top it would add much to the isolation feeling IMHO. pdml-requ...@pdml.net wrote: Message: 1 Date: Sun, 15 Sep 2013 22:37:21 +0100 From: Chris Mitchellchris.mitch...@which.net To: Pentax-Discuss Mail Listpdml@pdml.net Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study Message-ID: capxfea5tczm7lep33ft1rh_1ygvkj6ebwhk9nw7sqevwg8j...@mail.gmail.com Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Chris On 15 September 2013 22:09, Rick Womerrwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote: Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: Re: PESO - Morning Study
Thanks, Don. Yes, the one with the lady and umbrellas was mine, too. I carried my camera that day with my ongoing On My Way to Work project in mind, and caught the guy in the morning and the woman in the evening. I took Which Way? and Jump! the same day, too. Sometimes I take my camera along and never click the shutter, and sometimes I come back with keepers. Ya never know. Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW - Original Message - From: Don Guthrie shark50...@gmail.com To: pdml@pdml.net Cc: Sent: Monday, September 16, 2013 3:23 PM Subject: Re: Re: PESO - Morning Study I agree with Chris on the quality mood of the shot. Was the one with the umbrellas and the lady sitting by herself yours? It looks like a theme here. I do not mind the lower corner but if you cropped out the building from the top it would add much to the isolation feeling IMHO. pdml-requ...@pdml.net wrote: Message: 1 Date: Sun, 15 Sep 2013 22:37:21 +0100 From: Chris Mitchellchris.mitch...@which.net To: Pentax-Discuss Mail Listpdml@pdml.net Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study Message-ID: capxfea5tczm7lep33ft1rh_1ygvkj6ebwhk9nw7sqevwg8j...@mail.gmail.com Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Chris On 15 September 2013 22:09, Rick Womerrwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote: Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Morning Study
Like it as well, seems slightly different mood here. Good stuff. pdml-requ...@pdml.net wrote: Message: 7 Date: Sun, 15 Sep 2013 15:00:14 -0700 (PDT) From: Rick Womerrwomer1...@yahoo.com To: Pentax-Discuss Mail Listpdml@pdml.net Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study Message-ID: 1379282414.95933.yahoomail...@web121803.mail.ne1.yahoo.com Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Hmmm... I see what you mean about the bench, Chris.? I've tried various crops on this pic, and they lose the feeling of solitude I was trying to convey. So, here is a different shot from the same series; tell me what you think. http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17528412size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17528412-lg.jpg Cheers, Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
PESO - Morning Study
Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Morning Study
Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Chris On 15 September 2013 22:09, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote: Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Morning Study
A nice feeling of tranquility and solitude. Dan Matyola http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola On Sun, Sep 15, 2013 at 5:09 PM, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote: Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Morning Study
Hmmm... I see what you mean about the bench, Chris. I've tried various crops on this pic, and they lose the feeling of solitude I was trying to convey. So, here is a different shot from the same series; tell me what you think. http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17528412size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17528412-lg.jpg Cheers, Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW - Original Message - From: Chris Mitchell chris.mitch...@which.net To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net Cc: Sent: Sunday, September 15, 2013 5:37 PM Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Chris On 15 September 2013 22:09, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote: Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181size=lg or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Morning Study
On Sep 16, 2013, at 9:37 AM, Chris Mitchell chris.mitch...@which.net wrote: Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting. The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom section would do it? Interesting, my first thought was the same sort of thing: crop out the bottom for a panoramic format. Cheers, Dave -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
