Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-20 Thread Walt

Thank you, Bob.

If I'm not mistaken (my memory of the layout at that location is a tad 
sketchy) that's a war memorial monument. The spot is located between the 
county courthouse and city hall, and there's a fountain in the center 
with various flower trees, shrubs and planters around it. It's actually 
a decent place to take photos if you can keep other people out of the 
background.


But, yes -- I see what you're talking about. It's not quite enough to 
ruin the shot, but just enough to make me wish I'd framed it a wee bit 
differently.


-- Walt

On 7/20/2013 12:43 PM, Bob Sullivan wrote:

Walt,
Very nice photo and little to criticize.
Pose and composition work well, great skin tones and softness.
Is that a wooden telephone pole behind her head?
It might be better with just the grey/white street instead of the pole.
It's not very noticable, but a minor nit.
Regards,  Bob S.

On Sat, Jul 20, 2013 at 10:30 AM, knarftheria...@gmail.com
 wrote:

Background totally works.

Wonderful photo! Hard to imagine how it could be done better...

cheers,
frank

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From: Walt 
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Subject: PESO: Amaya II

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm
not sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post
the info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-20 Thread Bob Sullivan
Walt,
Very nice photo and little to criticize.
Pose and composition work well, great skin tones and softness.
Is that a wooden telephone pole behind her head?
It might be better with just the grey/white street instead of the pole.
It's not very noticable, but a minor nit.
Regards,  Bob S.

On Sat, Jul 20, 2013 at 10:30 AM, knarftheria...@gmail.com
 wrote:
> Background totally works.
>
> Wonderful photo! Hard to imagine how it could be done better...
>
> cheers,
> frank
>
> --- Original Message ---
>
> From: Walt 
> Sent: July 19, 2013 7/19/13
> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" 
> Subject: PESO: Amaya II
>
> Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
> capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm
> not sure of.
>
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
> K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6
>
> (Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post
> the info. Yikes!)
>
> Thoughts?
>
> -- Walt
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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-20 Thread Walt
Thank you, Christine -- and thanks for the kind words on the B&W shot, 
as well. :)


I'm actually kind of anxious to deliver this set to her mother. They 
really did turn out much better than I thought they would given the 
weather. And I think they represent, as a whole, my best work to date. 
Out of a total of just over 100 shots, a little under half were what I 
consider keepers.


-- Walt


On 7/20/2013 11:21 AM, Christine Aguila wrote:

That's excellent, Walt!  What I think really works here is the 
composition--great balance of all the elements.  I think I agree with Bruce 
about the contrast; I might like the overall rendering just a tad softer to 
compliment the expression and setting--though that's personal taste--and I 
don't mean a soft focus by the way.  She does have beautiful skin.  Very pretty 
young lady!

Cheers, Christine




On Jul 19, 2013, at 11:47 AM, Walt  wrote:


Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a capture 
of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm not sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post the 
info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-20 Thread Christine Aguila
That's excellent, Walt!  What I think really works here is the 
composition--great balance of all the elements.  I think I agree with Bruce 
about the contrast; I might like the overall rendering just a tad softer to 
compliment the expression and setting--though that's personal taste--and I 
don't mean a soft focus by the way.  She does have beautiful skin.  Very pretty 
young lady!  

Cheers, Christine




On Jul 19, 2013, at 11:47 AM, Walt  wrote:

> Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a capture 
> of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm not sure of.
> 
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
> K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6
> 
> (Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post the 
> info. Yikes!)
> 
> Thoughts?
> 
> -- Walt
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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-20 Thread Walt

Thank you, Frank!

She was an excellent subject to work with. Couldn't ask for a nicer 
young lady.


-- Walt


On 7/20/2013 10:30 AM, knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:

Background totally works.

Wonderful photo! Hard to imagine how it could be done better...

cheers,
frank

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From: Walt 
Sent: July 19, 2013 7/19/13
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" 
Subject: PESO: Amaya II

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm
not sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post
the info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt




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RE: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-20 Thread knarftheria...@gmail.com
Background totally works.

Wonderful photo! Hard to imagine how it could be done better...

cheers,
frank

--- Original Message ---

From: Walt 
Sent: July 19, 2013 7/19/13
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" 
Subject: PESO: Amaya II

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a 
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm 
not sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post 
the info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-19 Thread Walt

Thank you, Bruce!

I am a bit of a contrast junkie, I admit. I almost always use the medium 
contrast curve preset in LR.


I actually have CS2 installed (downloaded it when Adobe put all those 
licenses up on their server for the old apps), but have yet to use it on 
a single photo. I'm pretty much lost trying to use the tools, having no 
clue as to what adjustments are available, what those adjustments do, or 
much of anything else. There are just so many features that I'm at a 
loss as to where to even begin. I keep telling myself that one of these 
days, I'm going to sit down and learn how to use it, but it's like 
drinking from the proverbial fire hose.


I'll see if I can figure out how to do what you're talking about, 
though. That would be a huge help in a lot of my photos.


Thanks again!

-- Walt

On 7/19/2013 12:52 PM, Bruce Walker wrote:

That's a real winner, Walt. It's all good: light, expression,
background. My only comment is there's perhaps a tad too much overall
contrast, but that's more personal taste.

Were you doing fill with the tiny softbox? If so that may help explain
sharpness at 1/25th. The flash would help stop motion in the face.

(I have a pretty much sure-fire retouch for shiny skin using
Photoshop. Very soft Clone-stamp brush, Blend Mode Darken, Opacity
100%, Flow 5-10%. Sample nearby normal skin and paint over shiny
places. It's fast, easy and invisible.)


On Fri, Jul 19, 2013 at 12:47 PM, Walt  wrote:

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm not
sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post the
info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-19 Thread Bruce Walker
That's a real winner, Walt. It's all good: light, expression,
background. My only comment is there's perhaps a tad too much overall
contrast, but that's more personal taste.

Were you doing fill with the tiny softbox? If so that may help explain
sharpness at 1/25th. The flash would help stop motion in the face.

(I have a pretty much sure-fire retouch for shiny skin using
Photoshop. Very soft Clone-stamp brush, Blend Mode Darken, Opacity
100%, Flow 5-10%. Sample nearby normal skin and paint over shiny
places. It's fast, easy and invisible.)


On Fri, Jul 19, 2013 at 12:47 PM, Walt  wrote:
> Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
> capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm not
> sure of.
>
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
> K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6
>
> (Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post the
> info. Yikes!)
>
> Thoughts?
>
> -- Walt
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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-19 Thread Walt

Thank you, Dan.

That's the reason I dragged her by the ear over to those flowers when I 
saw them.


-- Walt


On 7/19/2013 2:22 PM, Daniel J. Matyola wrote:

that is a strong portrait, with a great pose and expression.  I also
like the way the colors of the flowers, the blouse and the lipstick
harmonize.

Dan Matyola
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On Fri, Jul 19, 2013 at 12:47 PM, Walt  wrote:

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm not
sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post the
info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt

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RE: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-19 Thread Gerrit Visser
She again has a wondeful look, very natural.

Welcome to K5 land with slow shutter speed not losing you the shot :-)

Gerrit

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Sent: Friday, July 19, 2013 12:47 PM
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Subject: PESO: Amaya II

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm not
sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post the
info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-19 Thread Daniel J. Matyola
that is a strong portrait, with a great pose and expression.  I also
like the way the colors of the flowers, the blouse and the lipstick
harmonize.

Dan Matyola
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola


On Fri, Jul 19, 2013 at 12:47 PM, Walt  wrote:
> Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
> capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm not
> sure of.
>
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
> K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6
>
> (Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post the
> info. Yikes!)
>
> Thoughts?
>
> -- Walt
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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-19 Thread Walt

Thanks, Jack.

I really was ambivalent about the background, and couldn't decide 
whether it detracted from the image or not. So, that's reassuring.


-- Walt

On 7/19/2013 1:25 PM, Jack Davis wrote:

Nicely composed, Walt.

Jack


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Subject: PESO: Amaya II

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm
not sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post
the info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt




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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-19 Thread Jack Davis
Nicely composed, Walt.

Jack


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Subject: PESO: Amaya II

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a 
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm 
not sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post 
the info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Amaya II

2013-07-19 Thread Walt

Thanks again, Gerrit.

The K-5's shake reduction must be a bit better than the K-x's. I was 
able to get reasonably sharp images with it as slow as 1/30 sec., but I 
had to brace or rest my elbows on a solid surface to do it.


The K-5 just seems to keep on doing different impressive things.

-- Walt

On 7/19/2013 11:59 AM, Gerrit Visser wrote:

She again has a wondeful look, very natural.

Welcome to K5 land with slow shutter speed not losing you the shot :-)

Gerrit

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Subject: PESO: Amaya II

Here's a color shot of Amaya (the young lady from my last PESO). As a
capture of the subject, I really like it. The background, though, I'm not
sure of.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9322765514/
K-5, F50/1.7, ISO 100, 1/25 sec(!), f/5.6

(Didn't realize the shutter speed until I just now looked it up to post the
info. Yikes!)

Thoughts?

-- Walt

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