Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-10 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
>Looks the same as v5 for me, that applies the same consistency rules
>everywhere in the docs.  So applied this one.

Thank you, Michael




Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-10 Thread Michael Paquier
On Thu, Mar 10, 2022 at 05:58:05PM -0500, Robert Treat wrote:
> Not sure why the previous emails didn't go through, and still doesn't
> look like they were picked up. In the interest of progress though,
> attaching an updated patch with some minor wordsmithing; lmk if you'd
> prefer this differently

Looks the same as v5 for me, that applies the same consistency rules
everywhere in the docs.  So applied this one.
--
Michael


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Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-10 Thread Robert Treat
On Thu, Mar 10, 2022 at 8:45 AM Daniel Westermann (DWE)
 wrote:
>
> >>>Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
> >>>the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
> >>>are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
> >>>protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
> >>>well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?
>
> >>>As of the full tree, I can see that:
> >>>
> >>$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
> >>259
>
> >>$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
> >>73
>
> >>>So there is a trend for one of the two.
>
> >>Thanks for looking at it. Yes, I am aware there are other places which 
> >>would need to be changed and I think I mentioned that in an >>earlier 
> >>Email. Are you suggesting to change all at once? I wanted to start with the 
> >>documentation and then continue with the other >>places.
>
> >Attached a new version which also modifies amcheck.sgml, config.sgml, 
> >protocol.sgml, and mvcc.sgml accordingly.
>
> Regards
> Daniel
>
>
> From: Daniel Westermann (DWE) 
> Sent: Wednesday, March 9, 2022 15:15
> To: Michael Paquier 
> Cc: Robert Treat ; Kyotaro Horiguchi 
> ; aleksan...@timescale.com 
> ; pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org 
> 
> Subject: Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"
>
> >>Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
> >>the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
> >>are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
> >>protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
> >>well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?
>
> >>As of the full tree, I can see that:
> >>
> >>$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
> >>259
>
> >>$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
> >>73
>
> >>So there is a trend for one of the two.
>
> >>Thanks for looking at it. Yes, I am aware there are other places which 
> >>would need to be changed and I think I mentioned that in an >>earlier 
> >>Email. Are you suggesting to change all at once? I wanted to start with the 
> >>documentation and then continue with the other >>places.
>
> >Attached a new version which also modifies amcheck.sgml, config.sgml, 
> >protocol.sgml, and mvcc.sgml accordingly.
>
> Sending this again as my last two mails did not seem to reach the archives or 
> the commitfest. Or do they need moderation somehow?
>

Not sure why the previous emails didn't go through, and still doesn't
look like they were picked up. In the interest of progress though,
attaching an updated patch with some minor wordsmithing; lmk if you'd
prefer this differently

Robert Treat
https://xzilla.net


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Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-10 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
>>>Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
>>>the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
>>>are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
>>>protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
>>>well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?

>>>As of the full tree, I can see that:
>>>
>>$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
>>259

>>$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
>>73

>>>So there is a trend for one of the two.

>>Thanks for looking at it. Yes, I am aware there are other places which would 
>>need to be changed and I think I mentioned that in an >>earlier Email. Are 
>>you suggesting to change all at once? I wanted to start with the 
>>documentation and then continue with the other >>places.

>Attached a new version which also modifies amcheck.sgml, config.sgml, 
>protocol.sgml, and mvcc.sgml accordingly.

Regards
Daniel


From: Daniel Westermann (DWE) 
Sent: Wednesday, March 9, 2022 15:15
To: Michael Paquier 
Cc: Robert Treat ; Kyotaro Horiguchi 
; aleksan...@timescale.com ; 
pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org 
Subject: Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby" 
 
>>Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
>>the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
>>are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
>>protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
>>well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?

>>As of the full tree, I can see that:
>>
>>$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
>>259

>>$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
>>73

>>So there is a trend for one of the two.

>>Thanks for looking at it. Yes, I am aware there are other places which would 
>>need to be changed and I think I mentioned that in an >>earlier Email. Are 
>>you suggesting to change all at once? I wanted to start with the 
>>documentation and then continue with the other >>places.

>Attached a new version which also modifies amcheck.sgml, config.sgml, 
>protocol.sgml, and mvcc.sgml accordingly.

Sending this again as my last two mails did not seem to reach the archives or 
the commitfest. Or do they need moderation somehow?

Regards
Danieldiff --git a/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
index 11d1eb5af2..5d61a33936 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ ORDER BY c.relpages DESC LIMIT 10;
   hypothetically, undiscovered bugs in the underlying B-Tree index
   access method code.  Note that
   bt_index_parent_check cannot be used when
-  Hot Standby mode is enabled (i.e., on read-only physical
+  hot standby mode is enabled (i.e., on read-only physical
   replicas), unlike bt_index_check.
  
 
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 7ed8c82a9d..e2db2a789f 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -4550,7 +4550,7 @@ ANY num_sync ( .
@@ -4582,7 +4582,7 @@ ANY num_sync ( .
@@ -10887,7 +10887,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
 Enables logging of recovery-related debugging output that otherwise
 would not be logged. This parameter allows the user to override the
 normal setting of , but only for
-specific messages. This is intended for use in debugging Hot Standby.
+specific messages. This is intended for use in debugging hot standby.
 Valid values are DEBUG5, DEBUG4,
 DEBUG3, DEBUG2, DEBUG1, and
 LOG.  The default, LOG, does not affect
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
index b5b6042104..81fa26f985 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
@@ -548,8 +548,8 @@ protocol to make nodes agree on a serializable transactional order.
rollforward will take considerably longer, so that technique only
offers a solution for disaster recovery, not high availability.
A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
-   more information.
+   it is called a hot standby server. See 
+for more information.
   
 
   
@@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@ primary_slot_name = 'node_a_slot'

 

-Hot Standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.
+Hot standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.

 

@@ -1499,16 +1499,16 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
   Hot Standby
 
   
-   Hot Standby
+   hot standby
   
 

-Hot Sta

Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-09 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
>>Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
>>the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
>>are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
>>protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
>>well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?

>>As of the full tree, I can see that:
>>
>>$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
>>259

>>$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
>>73

>>So there is a trend for one of the two.

>Thanks for looking at it. Yes, I am aware there are other places which would 
>need to be changed and I think I mentioned that in an >earlier Email. Are you 
>suggesting to change all at once? I wanted to start with the documentation and 
>then continue with the other >places.

Attached a new version which also modifies amcheck.sgml, config.sgml, 
protocol.sgml, and mvcc.sgml accordingly.

Regards
Danieldiff --git a/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
index 11d1eb5af2..5d61a33936 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ ORDER BY c.relpages DESC LIMIT 10;
   hypothetically, undiscovered bugs in the underlying B-Tree index
   access method code.  Note that
   bt_index_parent_check cannot be used when
-  Hot Standby mode is enabled (i.e., on read-only physical
+  hot standby mode is enabled (i.e., on read-only physical
   replicas), unlike bt_index_check.
  
 
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 7ed8c82a9d..e2db2a789f 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -4550,7 +4550,7 @@ ANY num_sync ( .
@@ -4582,7 +4582,7 @@ ANY num_sync ( .
@@ -10887,7 +10887,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
 Enables logging of recovery-related debugging output that otherwise
 would not be logged. This parameter allows the user to override the
 normal setting of , but only for
-specific messages. This is intended for use in debugging Hot Standby.
+specific messages. This is intended for use in debugging hot standby.
 Valid values are DEBUG5, DEBUG4,
 DEBUG3, DEBUG2, DEBUG1, and
 LOG.  The default, LOG, does not affect
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
index b5b6042104..81fa26f985 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
@@ -548,8 +548,8 @@ protocol to make nodes agree on a serializable transactional order.
rollforward will take considerably longer, so that technique only
offers a solution for disaster recovery, not high availability.
A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
-   more information.
+   it is called a hot standby server. See 
+for more information.
   
 
   
@@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@ primary_slot_name = 'node_a_slot'

 

-Hot Standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.
+Hot standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.

 

@@ -1499,16 +1499,16 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
   Hot Standby
 
   
-   Hot Standby
+   hot standby
   
 

-Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
+Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
 the server and run read-only queries while the server is in archive
 recovery or standby mode. This
 is useful both for replication purposes and for restoring a backup
 to a desired state with great precision.
-The term Hot Standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
+The term hot standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
 from recovery through to normal operation while users continue running
 queries and/or keep their connections open.

@@ -1623,7 +1623,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
being executed during recovery.  This restriction applies even to
temporary tables, because table rows cannot be read or written without
assigning a transaction ID, which is currently not possible in a
-   Hot Standby environment.
+   hot standby environment.
   
  
  
@@ -1703,7 +1703,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'

 In normal operation, read-only transactions are allowed to
 use LISTEN and NOTIFY,
-so Hot Standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
+so hot standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
 restrictions than ordinary read-only sessions.  It is possible that some
 of these restrictions might be loosened in a future release.

@@ -1746,7 +1746,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'

 

-There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with Hot Standby.
+There are 

Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-09 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
Hi Michael,

>On Wed, Mar 09, 2022 at 07:45:32AM +, Daniel Westermann (DWE) wrote:
>> Thanks for having a look. Done that way.

>Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
>the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
>are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
>protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
>well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?

>As of the full tree, I can see that:
>
>$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
>259

>$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
>73

>So there is a trend for one of the two.

Thanks for looking at it. Yes, I am aware there are other places which would 
need to be changed and I think I mentioned that in an earlier Email. Are you 
suggesting to change all at once? I wanted to start with the documentation and 
then continue with the other places.

Regards
Daniel



Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-09 Thread Michael Paquier
On Wed, Mar 09, 2022 at 07:45:32AM +, Daniel Westermann (DWE) wrote:
> Thanks for having a look. Done that way.

Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?

As of the full tree, I can see that:
$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
259
$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
73

So there is a trend for one of the two.
--
Michael


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Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-08 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
>I think one more small change...

>    A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
>-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
>+   it is called a hot standby server. See  for
>    more information.

>    A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
>-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
>+   it is called a hot standby server. See
> for
>    more information.

Thanks for having a look. Done that way.

Regards
Daniel
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
index b5b6042104..81fa26f985 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
@@ -548,8 +548,8 @@ protocol to make nodes agree on a serializable transactional order.
rollforward will take considerably longer, so that technique only
offers a solution for disaster recovery, not high availability.
A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
-   more information.
+   it is called a hot standby server. See 
+for more information.
   
 
   
@@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@ primary_slot_name = 'node_a_slot'

 

-Hot Standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.
+Hot standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.

 

@@ -1499,16 +1499,16 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
   Hot Standby
 
   
-   Hot Standby
+   hot standby
   
 

-Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
+Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
 the server and run read-only queries while the server is in archive
 recovery or standby mode. This
 is useful both for replication purposes and for restoring a backup
 to a desired state with great precision.
-The term Hot Standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
+The term hot standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
 from recovery through to normal operation while users continue running
 queries and/or keep their connections open.

@@ -1623,7 +1623,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
being executed during recovery.  This restriction applies even to
temporary tables, because table rows cannot be read or written without
assigning a transaction ID, which is currently not possible in a
-   Hot Standby environment.
+   hot standby environment.
   
  
  
@@ -1703,7 +1703,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'

 In normal operation, read-only transactions are allowed to
 use LISTEN and NOTIFY,
-so Hot Standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
+so hot standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
 restrictions than ordinary read-only sessions.  It is possible that some
 of these restrictions might be loosened in a future release.

@@ -1746,7 +1746,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'

 

-There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with Hot Standby.
+There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with hot standby.
 These conflicts are hard conflicts in the sense that queries
 might need to be canceled and, in some cases, sessions disconnected to resolve them.
 The user is provided with several ways to handle these
@@ -1947,8 +1947,8 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
 If hot_standby is on in postgresql.conf
 (the default value) and there is a
 standby.signalstandby.signalfor hot standby
-file present, the server will run in Hot Standby mode.
-However, it may take some time for Hot Standby connections to be allowed,
+file present, the server will run in hot standby mode.
+However, it may take some time for hot standby connections to be allowed,
 because the server will not accept connections until it has completed
 sufficient recovery to provide a consistent state against which queries
 can run.  During this period,
@@ -2282,7 +2282,7 @@ HINT:  You can then restart the server after making the necessary configuration
Caveats
 

-There are several limitations of Hot Standby.
+There are several limitations of hot standby.
 These can and probably will be fixed in future releases:
 
   
@@ -2299,7 +2299,7 @@ HINT:  You can then restart the server after making the necessary configuration
 
  Valid starting points for standby queries are generated at each
  checkpoint on the primary. If the standby is shut down while the primary
- is in a shutdown state, it might not be possible to re-enter Hot Standby
+ is in a shutdown state, it might not be possible to re-enter hot standby
  until the primary is started up, so that it generates further starting
  points in the WAL logs.  This situation isn't a problem in the most
  

Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-08 Thread Robert Treat
On Mon, Mar 7, 2022 at 11:06 AM Daniel Westermann (DWE)
 wrote:
>
> >>> Thanks for having a look. Are you suggesting to change it like this?
> >>> -Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
> >>> +Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
>
> >>Yes.  Isn't it the right form of a sentence?
>
> I've created and entry in the Commitfest 2022-07 for this.
>
I think one more small change...

A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
+   it is called a hot standby server. See  for
more information.

A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
+   it is called a hot standby server. See
 for
more information.

Robert Treat
https://xzilla.net




Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-07 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
>>> Thanks for having a look. Are you suggesting to change it like this?
>>> -Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
>>> +Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to

>>Yes.  Isn't it the right form of a sentence?

I've created and entry in the Commitfest 2022-07 for this.

Regards
Daniel


Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-02 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
>> Thanks for having a look. Are you suggesting to change it like this?
>> -    Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
>> +    Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to

>Yes.  Isn't it the right form of a sentence?

Done like that.

Regards
Danieldiff --git a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
index b5b6042104..ea10fe2be8 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ protocol to make nodes agree on a serializable transactional order.
rollforward will take considerably longer, so that technique only
offers a solution for disaster recovery, not high availability.
A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
+   it is called a hot standby server. See  for
more information.
   
 
@@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@ primary_slot_name = 'node_a_slot'

 

-Hot Standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.
+Hot standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.

 

@@ -1499,16 +1499,16 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
   Hot Standby
 
   
-   Hot Standby
+   hot standby
   
 

-Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
+Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
 the server and run read-only queries while the server is in archive
 recovery or standby mode. This
 is useful both for replication purposes and for restoring a backup
 to a desired state with great precision.
-The term Hot Standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
+The term hot standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
 from recovery through to normal operation while users continue running
 queries and/or keep their connections open.

@@ -1623,7 +1623,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
being executed during recovery.  This restriction applies even to
temporary tables, because table rows cannot be read or written without
assigning a transaction ID, which is currently not possible in a
-   Hot Standby environment.
+   hot standby environment.
   
  
  
@@ -1703,7 +1703,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'

 In normal operation, read-only transactions are allowed to
 use LISTEN and NOTIFY,
-so Hot Standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
+so hot standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
 restrictions than ordinary read-only sessions.  It is possible that some
 of these restrictions might be loosened in a future release.

@@ -1746,7 +1746,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'

 

-There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with Hot Standby.
+There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with hot standby.
 These conflicts are hard conflicts in the sense that queries
 might need to be canceled and, in some cases, sessions disconnected to resolve them.
 The user is provided with several ways to handle these
@@ -1947,8 +1947,8 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
 If hot_standby is on in postgresql.conf
 (the default value) and there is a
 standby.signalstandby.signalfor hot standby
-file present, the server will run in Hot Standby mode.
-However, it may take some time for Hot Standby connections to be allowed,
+file present, the server will run in hot standby mode.
+However, it may take some time for hot standby connections to be allowed,
 because the server will not accept connections until it has completed
 sufficient recovery to provide a consistent state against which queries
 can run.  During this period,
@@ -2282,7 +2282,7 @@ HINT:  You can then restart the server after making the necessary configuration
Caveats
 

-There are several limitations of Hot Standby.
+There are several limitations of hot standby.
 These can and probably will be fixed in future releases:
 
   
@@ -2299,7 +2299,7 @@ HINT:  You can then restart the server after making the necessary configuration
 
  Valid starting points for standby queries are generated at each
  checkpoint on the primary. If the standby is shut down while the primary
- is in a shutdown state, it might not be possible to re-enter Hot Standby
+ is in a shutdown state, it might not be possible to re-enter hot standby
  until the primary is started up, so that it generates further starting
  points in the WAL logs.  This situation isn't a problem in the most
  common situations where it might happen. Generally, if the primary is


Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-02 Thread Kyotaro Horiguchi
At Thu, 3 Mar 2022 06:55:43 +, "Daniel Westermann (DWE)" 
 wrote in 
> Hi Kyotaro,
> 
> >>    
> >>-    Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
> >>+    hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
> 
> >They look like decapitalizing the first word in a sentsnce.
> 
> Thanks for having a look. Are you suggesting to change it like this?
> -Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
> +Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to

Yes.  Isn't it the right form of a sentence?

regards.

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Kyotaro Horiguchi
NTT Open Source Software Center




Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-02 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
Hi Kyotaro,

>>    
>>-    Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
>>+    hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to

>They look like decapitalizing the first word in a sentsnce.

Thanks for having a look. Are you suggesting to change it like this?
-Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
+Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to

Regards
Daniel



Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-02 Thread Kyotaro Horiguchi
At Wed, 2 Mar 2022 15:22:44 +, "Daniel Westermann (DWE)" 
 wrote in 
> > Pretty sure that for titles we should keep English capitalization rules.
> 
> Done like that. Thanks for taking a look.


-Hot Standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded 
arrangement.
+hot standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement


-Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
+hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to


They look like decapitalizing the first word in a sentsnce.

regards.

-- 
Kyotaro Horiguchi
NTT Open Source Software Center




Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-02 Thread Daniel Westermann (DWE)
Hi Aleksander,

> Pretty sure that for titles we should keep English capitalization rules.

Done like that. Thanks for taking a look.

Regards
Danieldiff --git a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
index b5b6042104..08eb1ad946 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ protocol to make nodes agree on a serializable transactional order.
rollforward will take considerably longer, so that technique only
offers a solution for disaster recovery, not high availability.
A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See  for
+   it is called a hot standby server. See  for
more information.
   
 
@@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@ primary_slot_name = 'node_a_slot'

 

-Hot Standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.
+hot standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.

 

@@ -1499,16 +1499,16 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
   Hot Standby
 
   
-   Hot Standby
+   hot standby
   
 

-Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
+hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
 the server and run read-only queries while the server is in archive
 recovery or standby mode. This
 is useful both for replication purposes and for restoring a backup
 to a desired state with great precision.
-The term Hot Standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
+The term hot standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
 from recovery through to normal operation while users continue running
 queries and/or keep their connections open.

@@ -1623,7 +1623,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
being executed during recovery.  This restriction applies even to
temporary tables, because table rows cannot be read or written without
assigning a transaction ID, which is currently not possible in a
-   Hot Standby environment.
+   hot standby environment.
   
  
  
@@ -1703,7 +1703,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'

 In normal operation, read-only transactions are allowed to
 use LISTEN and NOTIFY,
-so Hot Standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
+so hot standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
 restrictions than ordinary read-only sessions.  It is possible that some
 of these restrictions might be loosened in a future release.

@@ -1746,7 +1746,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'

 

-There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with Hot Standby.
+There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with hot standby.
 These conflicts are hard conflicts in the sense that queries
 might need to be canceled and, in some cases, sessions disconnected to resolve them.
 The user is provided with several ways to handle these
@@ -1947,8 +1947,8 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
 If hot_standby is on in postgresql.conf
 (the default value) and there is a
 standby.signalstandby.signalfor hot standby
-file present, the server will run in Hot Standby mode.
-However, it may take some time for Hot Standby connections to be allowed,
+file present, the server will run in hot standby mode.
+However, it may take some time for hot standby connections to be allowed,
 because the server will not accept connections until it has completed
 sufficient recovery to provide a consistent state against which queries
 can run.  During this period,
@@ -2282,7 +2282,7 @@ HINT:  You can then restart the server after making the necessary configuration
Caveats
 

-There are several limitations of Hot Standby.
+There are several limitations of hot standby.
 These can and probably will be fixed in future releases:
 
   
@@ -2299,7 +2299,7 @@ HINT:  You can then restart the server after making the necessary configuration
 
  Valid starting points for standby queries are generated at each
  checkpoint on the primary. If the standby is shut down while the primary
- is in a shutdown state, it might not be possible to re-enter Hot Standby
+ is in a shutdown state, it might not be possible to re-enter hot standby
  until the primary is started up, so that it generates further starting
  points in the WAL logs.  This situation isn't a problem in the most
  common situations where it might happen. Generally, if the primary is


Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby"

2022-03-02 Thread Aleksander Alekseev
Hi Daniel,

> Here is a patch that changes "Hot Standby" to "hot standby" in
high-availability.sgml, so we have a consistent wording.
> Thoughts?

```
-   Hot Standby Parameter Reference
+   hot standby Parameter Reference
```

Pretty sure that for titles we should keep English capitalization rules.

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Best regards,
Aleksander Alekseev