Re: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-09 Thread Benjamin Kaduk
On Wed, Mar 09, 2022 at 10:35:01PM -0800, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker wrote: > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: Discuss > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in

[Ace] Murray Kucherawy's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-09 Thread Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker
Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: Discuss When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer

[Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-09 Thread Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker
Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to

Re: [Ace] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-09 Thread Carsten Bormann
Hi Roman, Thank you for your thoughts. Iā€™m currently collecting updates into https://github.com/cabo/ace-aif until the ID submission opens again. > On 2022-03-09, at 02:36, Roman Danyliw via Datatracker > wrote: > > Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for >

Re: [Ace] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-09 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Dear Lars, Thank you very much for your comments - I especially appreciated the nudge for inclusive language and tried to address them as best as I could. I know it was stated that there was no need to inform changes, but let me share the PR

Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-14

2022-03-09 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Fixed back in the new commit. Thank you! I wasn't sure how to react to downref comment. On Wed, 9 Mar 2022 at 23:39, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Wed, Mar 09, 2022 at 11:27:40PM +, Francesca Palombini wrote: > > > > Just one note: for the downref to informative documents (for those >

Re: [Ace] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-14

2022-03-09 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Hello Jean, Thank you for your feedback on the changes. I have updated the pull request with a new commit: https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/102/commits/75ac0c0a86812f359471a63f6b481b0b80482b97 Responses to questions/comments are inline below. On Wed, 9 Mar 2022 at 23:18, A. Jean

Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-14

2022-03-09 Thread Benjamin Kaduk
On Wed, Mar 09, 2022 at 11:27:40PM +, Francesca Palombini wrote: > > Just one note: for the downref to informative documents (for those documents > that were actually included in the text), please revert the change ā€“ RFC 6234 > and RFC 8032 were correctly referenced as normative, since they

Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-14

2022-03-09 Thread Francesca Palombini
Jean: thank you very much for your thoughtful review! Cigdem, thank you for addressing it, I do believe it improves the document. Just one note: for the downref to informative documents (for those documents that were actually included in the text), please revert the change ā€“ RFC 6234 and RFC

Re: [Ace] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-14

2022-03-09 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Cigdem, Thank you for reply and for incorporating the feedback into a PR. I have few comments and questions below. On 3/8/22 12:36 PM, Cigdem Sengul wrote: Dear Jean, Thank you for your review. I implemented changes and prepared a pull request at:

[Ace] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15

2022-03-09 Thread Derrell Piper via Datatracker
Reviewer: Derrell Piper Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG