ABNF, Validity, Relation Registry [was: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07]

2005-04-11 Thread Mark Nottingham
Does anybody have feedback on the suggestions/questions below? If I don't get any feedback on the ABNF or validity discussions, I'll proceed as outlined. I think there needs to be *some* feedback regarding the link relation registry; I'm proposing substantial changes there (my preferred

Re: ABNF, Validity, Relation Registry [was: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07]

2005-04-11 Thread Bill de hÓra
Mark Nottingham wrote: Hmm. As far as I can tell, the *only* place where we actually define a rule is 4.2.9.2, and that's just combining two rules by reference. I wonder if we can save complexity here (and remove one normative reference) by just doing this in prose; the text is currently: [[[

Re: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-11 Thread Mark Nottingham
Oops; I meant draft-freed-media-type-reg. On Apr 6, 2005, at 5:13 PM, Mark Nottingham wrote: Section 4: RFC 2045 is referenced. 2045 is on its way to being obsoleted by draft-freed-mime-p4 (in the RFC Editor queue) and draft-freed-media-type-reg (in last call). Can the more recent documents

RE: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-07 Thread Scott Hollenbeck
Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07 Done; http://eikenes.alvestrand.no/pipermail/ietf-types/2005-April/ 000676.html Just curious; when/how does the ietf-types list switch over to @iana.org (as per draft-freed-media-type-reg)? On Apr 5, 2005, at 8:39 AM, Scott

Re: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-06 Thread Mark Nottingham
On Apr 5, 2005, at 9:26 AM, Tim Bray wrote: Section 1.2: please reference draft-crocker-abnf-rfc2234bis-00.txt instead of RFC 2234 and confirm that everything that was valid before is still valid. The IESG approved this document as a Draft Standard last week. Rob/Mark? Hmm. As far as I can tell,

Re: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-06 Thread Mark Nottingham
Done; http://eikenes.alvestrand.no/pipermail/ietf-types/2005-April/ 000676.html Just curious; when/how does the ietf-types list switch over to @iana.org (as per draft-freed-media-type-reg)? On Apr 5, 2005, at 8:39 AM, Scott Hollenbeck wrote: The MIME media type registration template

AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-05 Thread Scott Hollenbeck
Your working group chairs have asked me to shepherd draft-ietf-atompub-format-07 through IETF last call. As part of that process, I have an obligation to review the document myself. I've completed my review and I'd like to share my comments and a few questions with the group. A new version of

RE: RNG and examples (was: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07)

2005-04-05 Thread Scott Hollenbeck
software package. I saw your follow-up; thanks. -Scott- -Original Message- From: Robert Sayre [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Tuesday, April 05, 2005 12:05 PM To: Scott Hollenbeck Cc: atom-syntax@imc.org Subject: RNG and examples (was: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf

RE: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-05 Thread Scott Hollenbeck
-Original Message- From: Tim Bray [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Tuesday, April 05, 2005 12:26 PM To: Scott Hollenbeck Cc: atom-syntax@imc.org Subject: Re: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07 On Apr 5, 2005, at 8:39 AM, Scott Hollenbeck wrote

Re: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-05 Thread Paul Hoffman
At 9:26 AM -0700 4/5/05, Tim Bray wrote: Section 7.1: what process is the IESG supposed to use to review registration requests? Please see section 2 of RFC 2434/BCP 26 for mechanisms that might be used and please specify one in the document. Paul, care to take the lead on this? -Tim Nope. Scott:

RE: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-05 Thread Scott Hollenbeck
-Original Message- From: Paul Hoffman [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Tuesday, April 05, 2005 2:07 PM To: Tim Bray; Scott Hollenbeck Cc: atom-syntax@imc.org Subject: Re: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07 At 9:26 AM -0700 4/5/05, Tim Bray wrote

RE: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07

2005-04-05 Thread Paul Hoffman
At 2:25 PM -0400 4/5/05, Scott Hollenbeck wrote: As described in 2434, IESG Approval, though the IESG has discretion to request documents or other supporting materials on a case-by-case basis. Right. I'd really like to see some guidance in the document to describe what the IESG should look for.

Re: RNG and examples (was: AD Review Comments and Questions: draft-ietf-atompub-format-07)

2005-04-05 Thread Bill de hÓra
Robert Sayre wrote: Scott Hollenbeck wrote: Thanks, but you didn't answer all of my question. Has someone (you?) confirmed that the schema and examples are consistent? OK, I'm probably not the best person to check the examples. Volunteers? Me. Will be back to you in 24h. cheers Bill