Mark,
Do you want me to apply this, or do you prefer to resubmit taking
Eric's comments into account?
(Tommy, David -- opinions?)
Juliusz
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Applied to the unstable branch, by Mark's request.
I fully agree with Eric -- the ``Hello, I'm'' sounds wrong to European ears.
There are three things I dislike: ``smartness'', ``spontaneous branches''
and ``efficient to use''. Help from native speakers welcome.
efficient to use sounds fine.
As for this:
This smartness lets you respond to changing demands in ways that
would otherwise not be possible. Learn more about spontaneous branches
with darcs.
My suggestion:
Darcs lets you respond to changing demands in ways that are tough to
do in other systems,
Sun Aug 20 15:14:15 EDT 2006 Mark Stosberg [EMAIL PROTECTED]
* overhaul the darcs.net front page.
The themes to this change are:
- Focus on the key benefits of darcs:
Distributed. Interactive. Smart.
- Recognize that the wiki is the central resource,
and remove some
On Sun, Aug 20, 2006 at 07:17:36PM -, Mark Stosberg wrote:
Sun Aug 20 15:14:15 EDT 2006 Mark Stosberg [EMAIL PROTECTED]
* overhaul the darcs.net front page.
Very nice!
+p a name=introDarcs is a free, open source source code
management system./a /p
Should it be a comma
On Aug 20, 2006, at 3:26 PM, Tommy Pettersson wrote:
+p a name=introDarcs is a free, open source
source code management system./a /p
Should it be a comma here: free, open source,-HERE source code
management system?
Hmm. If open source is a parenthetical or appositive kind of