Nits and notes:
Abstract:
O: The DNS is considered a crucial part of that technical infrastrcuture.
P: The DNS is considered a crucial part of that technical infrastructure.
C: s/infrastrcuture/infrastructure/ -- typo.
Background:
O: ...servers to enable robust dand resilient…
P: ...servers
will fold them in, thanks.
/bill
On Sun, Feb 05, 2012 at 11:34:06AM -0500, Warren Kumari wrote:
Nits and notes:
Abstract:
O: The DNS is considered a crucial part of that technical infrastrcuture.
P: The DNS is considered a crucial part of that technical infrastructure.
C:
Bill,
Comments/nits/etc.
Regards,
-drc
Last sentence of Abstract:
... zones may also find it useful.
Might suggest ... zones may also find this document useful.
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1. Background, second sentence:
The Internet Assigned Numbers Authority (IANA) publishes ...
Should be:
The Internet
thanks! will fold in accordingly.
/bill
On Sun, Feb 05, 2012 at 07:40:49PM -0800, David Conrad wrote:
Bill,
Comments/nits/etc.
Regards,
-drc
Last sentence of Abstract:
... zones may also find it useful.
Might suggest ... zones may also find this document useful.
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thanks. will fold in your comments.
/bill
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