OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-18 Thread Shmuel Wolfson
The writer should read it over, but IMHO someone else should also read 
it. It's hard for the same person to catch all the mistakes and ambiguities.

Regards,
Shmuel Wolfson


Steve Rickaby wrote:
> An interesting discussion, and you all make very valid points. Here in the UK 
> some of the folks I work with still make the traditional distinction between 
> copy-editing and proofreading that dates from the days of hot metal. However, 
> the terms are becoming blurred, and this is causing some confusion. 
>
> This confusion become damaging when it results in a final production process 
> that misses the fact that the proofer has no content knowledge. It also leads 
> to the question of whether *copy-editing* can be performed in any effective 
> way by someone without content knowledge: my contention is 'no', but in fact 
> this is often what happens... 'copy-editing' is confused with 'proofreading'.
>
> I believe that it *is* possible to effectively edit and proof your own work, 
> but it is hard, and requires a substantial mind-shift. I agree that it is 
> certainly not desirable, but sometimes it cannot be avoided for cost or other 
> reasons.
>
> Story: some time ago I was commissioned to write a book. After writing it, I 
> lightly copy-edited it as time allowed. The publisher then sent the Ms to a 
> trained freelance proofreader (or, as I thought, copy-editor). I applied 
> their corrections. Some time later I was reworking the material and found 
> some glaring errors, so I carried out a complete reproof and analysis. I was 
> quite shocked at the number of undiscovered errors I found. Some were typos, 
> some were technical. It turned out that the proofreader had little or no 
> understanding of the content.
>
> I suppose the moral is that sometimes things don't turn out as you expect 
> even if you do everything 'right'.
>
>   



RE: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-18 Thread Gillian Flato
I think that their are two kinds of Technical Proofing/Editing.

1.  Technical/Functional Editing - This is performed by the SME. It is
to check that all of your technical facts are correct. This could be QA
engineers, Software Programmers, or like at my company, PH.D scientists.
(Most of the people in this category, at my company, are ESL and cannot
check the English.)

2. Writing Editing - This is performed by another Technical Writer or an
Editor. It is to check your English (or whatever language you write in),
grammar, spelling, flow and technical writing. (Most of the people in
this category, at my company, are not Engineers and can't check the
facts, only the writing).

Both sets of people need to proof your docs and check for what falls
under their expertise.


Thank you,

Gillian Flato


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Subject: Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

The writer should read it over, but IMHO someone else should also read 
it. It's hard for the same person to catch all the mistakes and
ambiguities.

Regards,
Shmuel Wolfson


Steve Rickaby wrote:
> An interesting discussion, and you all make very valid points. Here in
the UK some of the folks I work with still make the traditional
distinction between copy-editing and proofreading that dates from the
days of hot metal. However, the terms are becoming blurred, and this is
causing some confusion. 
>
> This confusion become damaging when it results in a final production
process that misses the fact that the proofer has no content knowledge.
It also leads to the question of whether *copy-editing* can be performed
in any effective way by someone without content knowledge: my contention
is 'no', but in fact this is often what happens... 'copy-editing' is
confused with 'proofreading'.
>
> I believe that it *is* possible to effectively edit and proof your own
work, but it is hard, and requires a substantial mind-shift. I agree
that it is certainly not desirable, but sometimes it cannot be avoided
for cost or other reasons.
>
> Story: some time ago I was commissioned to write a book. After writing
it, I lightly copy-edited it as time allowed. The publisher then sent
the Ms to a trained freelance proofreader (or, as I thought,
copy-editor). I applied their corrections. Some time later I was
reworking the material and found some glaring errors, so I carried out a
complete reproof and analysis. I was quite shocked at the number of
undiscovered errors I found. Some were typos, some were technical. It
turned out that the proofreader had little or no understanding of the
content.
>
> I suppose the moral is that sometimes things don't turn out as you
expect even if you do everything 'right'.
>
>   
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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-18 Thread Gillian Flato
I think that their are two kinds of Technical Proofing/Editing.

1.  Technical/Functional Editing - This is performed by the SME. It is
to check that all of your technical facts are correct. This could be QA
engineers, Software Programmers, or like at my company, PH.D scientists.
(Most of the people in this category, at my company, are ESL and cannot
check the English.)

2. Writing Editing - This is performed by another Technical Writer or an
Editor. It is to check your English (or whatever language you write in),
grammar, spelling, flow and technical writing. (Most of the people in
this category, at my company, are not Engineers and can't check the
facts, only the writing).

Both sets of people need to proof your docs and check for what falls
under their expertise.


Thank you,

Gillian Flato


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From: framers-bounces+gflato=nanometrics@lists.frameusers.com
[mailto:framers-bounces+gflato=nanometrics.com at lists.frameusers.com] On
Behalf Of Shmuel Wolfson
Sent: Monday, December 18, 2006 5:30 AM
To: framers at lists.frameusers.com
Subject: Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

The writer should read it over, but IMHO someone else should also read 
it. It's hard for the same person to catch all the mistakes and
ambiguities.

Regards,
Shmuel Wolfson


Steve Rickaby wrote:
> An interesting discussion, and you all make very valid points. Here in
the UK some of the folks I work with still make the traditional
distinction between copy-editing and proofreading that dates from the
days of hot metal. However, the terms are becoming blurred, and this is
causing some confusion. 
>
> This confusion become damaging when it results in a final production
process that misses the fact that the proofer has no content knowledge.
It also leads to the question of whether *copy-editing* can be performed
in any effective way by someone without content knowledge: my contention
is 'no', but in fact this is often what happens... 'copy-editing' is
confused with 'proofreading'.
>
> I believe that it *is* possible to effectively edit and proof your own
work, but it is hard, and requires a substantial mind-shift. I agree
that it is certainly not desirable, but sometimes it cannot be avoided
for cost or other reasons.
>
> Story: some time ago I was commissioned to write a book. After writing
it, I lightly copy-edited it as time allowed. The publisher then sent
the Ms to a trained freelance proofreader (or, as I thought,
copy-editor). I applied their corrections. Some time later I was
reworking the material and found some glaring errors, so I carried out a
complete reproof and analysis. I was quite shocked at the number of
undiscovered errors I found. Some were typos, some were technical. It
turned out that the proofreader had little or no understanding of the
content.
>
> I suppose the moral is that sometimes things don't turn out as you
expect even if you do everything 'right'.
>
>   
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Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-18 Thread Shmuel Wolfson
The writer should read it over, but IMHO someone else should also read 
it. It's hard for the same person to catch all the mistakes and ambiguities.


Regards,
Shmuel Wolfson


Steve Rickaby wrote:
An interesting discussion, and you all make very valid points. Here in the UK some of the folks I work with still make the traditional distinction between copy-editing and proofreading that dates from the days of hot metal. However, the terms are becoming blurred, and this is causing some confusion. 


This confusion become damaging when it results in a final production process 
that misses the fact that the proofer has no content knowledge. It also leads 
to the question of whether *copy-editing* can be performed in any effective way 
by someone without content knowledge: my contention is 'no', but in fact this 
is often what happens... 'copy-editing' is confused with 'proofreading'.

I believe that it *is* possible to effectively edit and proof your own work, 
but it is hard, and requires a substantial mind-shift. I agree that it is 
certainly not desirable, but sometimes it cannot be avoided for cost or other 
reasons.

Story: some time ago I was commissioned to write a book. After writing it, I 
lightly copy-edited it as time allowed. The publisher then sent the Ms to a 
trained freelance proofreader (or, as I thought, copy-editor). I applied their 
corrections. Some time later I was reworking the material and found some 
glaring errors, so I carried out a complete reproof and analysis. I was quite 
shocked at the number of undiscovered errors I found. Some were typos, some 
were technical. It turned out that the proofreader had little or no 
understanding of the content.

I suppose the moral is that sometimes things don't turn out as you expect even 
if you do everything 'right'.

  

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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-16 Thread Steve Rickaby
An interesting discussion, and you all make very valid points. Here in the UK 
some of the folks I work with still make the traditional distinction between 
copy-editing and proofreading that dates from the days of hot metal. However, 
the terms are becoming blurred, and this is causing some confusion. 

This confusion become damaging when it results in a final production process 
that misses the fact that the proofer has no content knowledge. It also leads 
to the question of whether *copy-editing* can be performed in any effective way 
by someone without content knowledge: my contention is 'no', but in fact this 
is often what happens... 'copy-editing' is confused with 'proofreading'.

I believe that it *is* possible to effectively edit and proof your own work, 
but it is hard, and requires a substantial mind-shift. I agree that it is 
certainly not desirable, but sometimes it cannot be avoided for cost or other 
reasons.

Story: some time ago I was commissioned to write a book. After writing it, I 
lightly copy-edited it as time allowed. The publisher then sent the Ms to a 
trained freelance proofreader (or, as I thought, copy-editor). I applied their 
corrections. Some time later I was reworking the material and found some 
glaring errors, so I carried out a complete reproof and analysis. I was quite 
shocked at the number of undiscovered errors I found. Some were typos, some 
were technical. It turned out that the proofreader had little or no 
understanding of the content.

I suppose the moral is that sometimes things don't turn out as you expect even 
if you do everything 'right'.

-- 
Steve



RE: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-16 Thread Steve Rickaby
An interesting discussion, and you all make very valid points. Here in the UK 
some of the folks I work with still make the traditional distinction between 
copy-editing and proofreading that dates from the days of hot metal. However, 
the terms are becoming blurred, and this is causing some confusion. 

This confusion become damaging when it results in a final production process 
that misses the fact that the proofer has no content knowledge. It also leads 
to the question of whether *copy-editing* can be performed in any effective way 
by someone without content knowledge: my contention is 'no', but in fact this 
is often what happens... 'copy-editing' is confused with 'proofreading'.

I believe that it *is* possible to effectively edit and proof your own work, 
but it is hard, and requires a substantial mind-shift. I agree that it is 
certainly not desirable, but sometimes it cannot be avoided for cost or other 
reasons.

Story: some time ago I was commissioned to write a book. After writing it, I 
lightly copy-edited it as time allowed. The publisher then sent the Ms to a 
trained freelance proofreader (or, as I thought, copy-editor). I applied their 
corrections. Some time later I was reworking the material and found some 
glaring errors, so I carried out a complete reproof and analysis. I was quite 
shocked at the number of undiscovered errors I found. Some were typos, some 
were technical. It turned out that the proofreader had little or no 
understanding of the content.

I suppose the moral is that sometimes things don't turn out as you expect even 
if you do everything 'right'.

-- 
Steve
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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread d.mossfri...@comcast.net
Good Day Art and Natalie,

If you are looking at only spelling and grammar, perhaps. However, the problems 
encountered at our site deal more with content (complete procedures, no link 
from the help file to an application's Help buttons, lack of option and data 
column descriptions, and more) and the structure of documents.

A couple of years ago our expert (of spelling and grammer) reviewed a 
contractor's publication and offered a couple of comments. What the expert had 
missed was the description of the software application was backwards of the 
application's actual purpose and operation.

Afraid I must say that proofing a document depends upon the purpose of that 
proofing.

Best,

 Denise L. Moss-Fritch

-- Original message -- 
From: "Art Campbell"  

> In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's 
> a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling 
> and grammar skills. 
> 
> If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be 
> the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at 
> it with fresh eyes. 
> 
> But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller / 
> grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job. 
> 
> Art 
> 
> 
> 
> On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher wrote: 
> > This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as 
> > writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the 
> > documents you write? Should it ever be the writer? 


RE: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Natalie Bircher
Fred, I agree with your philosophy.

Of course we all try to do our best to write it right the first time,
but things will escape us, and there will always be "better choices"
that could be made (such as a more common example).

The writer should definitely do a spell check and re-read what they have
written to look for best word usage/punctuation/capitalization issues.
Also check for spacing and graphics issues.

We will probably agree that SMEs should be available to check for
content and usage. In our company, the trainer determines the order of
the topics, so they would check that. I would also maintain that other
English-major-types look at the doc for structure, consistency of style
and format and double-check for punctuation, spelling and
capitalization.

It seems that the only time anyone here disagrees with this, is when an
error slips through. Then out comes the tar and feathers for the
writer...never for the other FIVE people who looked at it.

?



-Original Message-
From: Ridder, Fred [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] 
Sent: Friday, December 15, 2006 3:31 PM
To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Art Campbell; Natalie Bircher
Cc: framers@lists.frameusers.com
Subject: RE: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

What you have described is much deeper than what I
would call proofreading. I would put some it under the 
heading of SME content review (which shouldn't get 
sidetracked in issues of grammar or punctuation), and 
most of it under editing (which really has several of its
own subcategories).

No one set of eyes is ever going to pick up all classes 
of errors and issues. And if the number of different people 
available to review/edit/proofread a document is limited,
you'll still get better results if those people do multiple
passes through the document with a limited scope for 
each pass. 

My opinions only; I don't speak for Intel.
Fred Ridder (fred dot ridder at intel dot com)
Intel
Parsippany, NJ


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Sent: Friday, December 15, 2006 3:19 PM
To: Art Campbell; Natalie Bircher
Cc: framers@lists.frameusers.com
Subject: Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

Good Day Art and Natalie,

If you are looking at only spelling and grammar, perhaps. However, the
problems encountered at our site deal more with content (complete
procedures, no link from the help file to an application's Help buttons,
lack of option and data column descriptions, and more) and the structure
of documents.

A couple of years ago our expert (of spelling and grammer) reviewed a
contractor's publication and offered a couple of comments. What the
expert had missed was the description of the software application was
backwards of the application's actual purpose and operation.

Afraid I must say that proofing a document depends upon the purpose of
that proofing.

Best,

 Denise L. Moss-Fritch

-- Original message -- 
From: "Art Campbell" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> 

> In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's

> a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling

> and grammar skills. 
> 
> If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be 
> the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at 
> it with fresh eyes. 
> 
> But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller / 
> grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job. 
> 
> Art 
> 
> 
> 
> On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher wrote: 
> > This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as 
> > writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the 
> > documents you write? Should it ever be the writer? 
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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Ridder, Fred
What you have described is much deeper than what I
would call proofreading. I would put some it under the 
heading of SME content review (which shouldn't get 
sidetracked in issues of grammar or punctuation), and 
most of it under editing (which really has several of its
own subcategories).

No one set of eyes is ever going to pick up all classes 
of errors and issues. And if the number of different people 
available to review/edit/proofread a document is limited,
you'll still get better results if those people do multiple
passes through the document with a limited scope for 
each pass. 

My opinions only; I don't speak for Intel.
Fred Ridder (fred dot ridder at intel dot com)
Intel
Parsippany, NJ


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From: framers-bounces+fred.ridder=intel@lists.frameusers.com
[mailto:framers-bounces+fred.ridder=intel.com at lists.frameusers.com] On
Behalf Of d.mossfritch at comcast.net
Sent: Friday, December 15, 2006 3:19 PM
To: Art Campbell; Natalie Bircher
Cc: framers at lists.frameusers.com
Subject: Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

Good Day Art and Natalie,

If you are looking at only spelling and grammar, perhaps. However, the
problems encountered at our site deal more with content (complete
procedures, no link from the help file to an application's Help buttons,
lack of option and data column descriptions, and more) and the structure
of documents.

A couple of years ago our expert (of spelling and grammer) reviewed a
contractor's publication and offered a couple of comments. What the
expert had missed was the description of the software application was
backwards of the application's actual purpose and operation.

Afraid I must say that proofing a document depends upon the purpose of
that proofing.

Best,

 Denise L. Moss-Fritch

-- Original message -- 
From: "Art Campbell"  

> In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's

> a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling

> and grammar skills. 
> 
> If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be 
> the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at 
> it with fresh eyes. 
> 
> But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller / 
> grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job. 
> 
> Art 
> 
> 
> 
> On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher wrote: 
> > This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as 
> > writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the 
> > documents you write? Should it ever be the writer? 
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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Art Campbell
Denise,

I don't totally disagree with your contention, but proofreading is one
thing... and content / structural editing, fact-checking, and quality
assurance, the topics that you touch upon are something else. I'm
intentionally defining "proofreading" in a narrow, traditional way.

The problems that you related are much more basic and mechanical...
they should all be resolved before proofreading takes place, IMHO.
Making sure the quality is built in is a continuous process that needs
attention from the beginning of the project; you can't do it at the
last minute.

Cheers,
Art

On 12/15/06, d.mossfritch at comcast.net  wrote:
>
> Good Day Art and Natalie,
>
> If you are looking at only spelling and grammar, perhaps. However, the
> problems encountered at our site deal more with content (complete
> procedures, no link from the help file to an application's Help buttons,
> lack of option and data column descriptions, and more) and the structure of
> documents.
>
> A couple of years ago our expert (of spelling and grammer) reviewed a
> contractor's publication and offered a couple of comments. What the expert
> had missed was the description of the software application was backwards of
> the application's actual purpose and operation.
>
> Afraid I must say that proofing a document depends upon the purpose of that
> proofing.
>
> Best,
>
>  Denise L. Moss-Fritch
>
> -- Original message --
> From: "Art Campbell" 
>
> > In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's
> > a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling
> > and grammar skills.
> >
> > If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be
> > the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at
> > it with fresh eyes.
> >
> > But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller /
> > grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job.
> >
> > Art
> >
> >
> >
> > On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher wrote:
> > > This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
> > > writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofin g of the
> > > documents you write? Should it ever be the writer?
>


-- 
Art Campbell art.campbell at 
gmail.com
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   and a redheaded girl." -- Richard Thompson
 No disclaimers apply.
 DoD 358



OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Natalie Bircher
Fred, I agree with your philosophy.

Of course we all try to do our best to write it right the first time,
but things will escape us, and there will always be "better choices"
that could be made (such as a more common example).

The writer should definitely do a spell check and re-read what they have
written to look for best word usage/punctuation/capitalization issues.
Also check for spacing and graphics issues.

We will probably agree that SMEs should be available to check for
content and usage. In our company, the trainer determines the order of
the topics, so they would check that. I would also maintain that other
English-major-types look at the doc for structure, consistency of style
and format and double-check for punctuation, spelling and
capitalization.

It seems that the only time anyone here disagrees with this, is when an
error slips through. Then out comes the tar and feathers for the
writer...never for the other FIVE people who looked at it.

?



-Original Message-
From: Ridder, Fred [mailto:fred.rid...@intel.com] 
Sent: Friday, December 15, 2006 3:31 PM
To: d.mossfritch at comcast.net; Art Campbell; Natalie Bircher
Cc: framers at lists.frameusers.com
Subject: RE: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

What you have described is much deeper than what I
would call proofreading. I would put some it under the 
heading of SME content review (which shouldn't get 
sidetracked in issues of grammar or punctuation), and 
most of it under editing (which really has several of its
own subcategories).

No one set of eyes is ever going to pick up all classes 
of errors and issues. And if the number of different people 
available to review/edit/proofread a document is limited,
you'll still get better results if those people do multiple
passes through the document with a limited scope for 
each pass. 

My opinions only; I don't speak for Intel.
Fred Ridder (fred dot ridder at intel dot com)
Intel
Parsippany, NJ


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From: framers-bounces+fred.ridder=intel@lists.frameusers.com
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Behalf Of d.mossfritch at comcast.net
Sent: Friday, December 15, 2006 3:19 PM
To: Art Campbell; Natalie Bircher
Cc: framers at lists.frameusers.com
Subject: Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

Good Day Art and Natalie,

If you are looking at only spelling and grammar, perhaps. However, the
problems encountered at our site deal more with content (complete
procedures, no link from the help file to an application's Help buttons,
lack of option and data column descriptions, and more) and the structure
of documents.

A couple of years ago our expert (of spelling and grammer) reviewed a
contractor's publication and offered a couple of comments. What the
expert had missed was the description of the software application was
backwards of the application's actual purpose and operation.

Afraid I must say that proofing a document depends upon the purpose of
that proofing.

Best,

 Denise L. Moss-Fritch

-- Original message -- 
From: "Art Campbell"  

> In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's

> a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling

> and grammar skills. 
> 
> If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be 
> the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at 
> it with fresh eyes. 
> 
> But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller / 
> grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job. 
> 
> Art 
> 
> 
> 
> On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher wrote: 
> > This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as 
> > writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the 
> > documents you write? Should it ever be the writer? 
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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread John Sgammato
I am a lone writer, so I am ultimately responsible for the docs. I have no 
editor, proofreader, or any suport whatever. I try to get someone from QA to go 
over everything, but that seldom happens. Even when it does, I go over it 
myself. 

The problem is that a non-writer can get quite exhausted and careless or 
resentful looking at every character, while a trained writer can skim a lot and 
focus on the places most likely to have problems.  When you are responsible for 
14 books and 6 online helps and a bunch of small end-user documents and other 
auxiliary docs, it really is quicker for the writer to do it, if s/he can 
develop the discipline. 





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Natalie Bircher
Sent: Fri 12/15/2006 2:29 PM
To: framers at lists.frameusers.com
Subject: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?



This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the
documents you write? Should it ever be the writer?







Natalie Bircher

Documentation Specialist

Dairyland Healthcare Solutions

Phone: 320-634-3841

Fax: 320-634-1349

Email: natalie.bircher at dhsnet.com



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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Rick Quatro
Hi Natalie,

It is bad practice for a writer or typesetter to proofread their own work. I 
worked at one shop where you would get fired for doing so. You always handed 
the document off to a professional staff proofreader.

Rick Quatro
Carmen Publishing
585-659-8267
www.frameexpert.com

This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the
documents you write? Should it ever be the writer?


Natalie Bircher

Documentation Specialist

Dairyland Healthcare Solutions

Phone: 320-634-3841

Fax: 320-634-1349

Email: natalie.bircher at dhsnet.com




OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Art Campbell
In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's
a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling
and grammar skills.

If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be
the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at
it with fresh eyes.

But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller /
grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job.

Art



On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher  wrote:
> This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
> writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the
> documents you write? Should it ever be the writer?
>
>
>

-- 
Art Campbell art.campbell at 
gmail.com
  "... In my opinion, there's nothing in this world beats a '52 Vincent
   and a redheaded girl." -- Richard Thompson
 No disclaimers apply.
 DoD 358



RE: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Ridder, Fred
What you have described is much deeper than what I
would call proofreading. I would put some it under the 
heading of SME content review (which shouldn't get 
sidetracked in issues of grammar or punctuation), and 
most of it under editing (which really has several of its
own subcategories).

No one set of eyes is ever going to pick up all classes 
of errors and issues. And if the number of different people 
available to review/edit/proofread a document is limited,
you'll still get better results if those people do multiple
passes through the document with a limited scope for 
each pass. 

My opinions only; I don't speak for Intel.
Fred Ridder (fred dot ridder at intel dot com)
Intel
Parsippany, NJ


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Subject: Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

Good Day Art and Natalie,

If you are looking at only spelling and grammar, perhaps. However, the
problems encountered at our site deal more with content (complete
procedures, no link from the help file to an application's Help buttons,
lack of option and data column descriptions, and more) and the structure
of documents.

A couple of years ago our expert (of spelling and grammer) reviewed a
contractor's publication and offered a couple of comments. What the
expert had missed was the description of the software application was
backwards of the application's actual purpose and operation.

Afraid I must say that proofing a document depends upon the purpose of
that proofing.

Best,

 Denise L. Moss-Fritch

-- Original message -- 
From: "Art Campbell" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> 

> In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's

> a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling

> and grammar skills. 
> 
> If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be 
> the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at 
> it with fresh eyes. 
> 
> But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller / 
> grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job. 
> 
> Art 
> 
> 
> 
> On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher wrote: 
> > This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as 
> > writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the 
> > documents you write? Should it ever be the writer? 
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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Natalie Bircher
This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the
documents you write? Should it ever be the writer? 







Natalie Bircher

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Dairyland Healthcare Solutions

Phone: 320-634-3841

Fax: 320-634-1349

Email: natalie.bircher at dhsnet.com



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Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Art Campbell

Denise,

I don't totally disagree with your contention, but proofreading is one
thing... and content / structural editing, fact-checking, and quality
assurance, the topics that you touch upon are something else. I'm
intentionally defining "proofreading" in a narrow, traditional way.

The problems that you related are much more basic and mechanical...
they should all be resolved before proofreading takes place, IMHO.
Making sure the quality is built in is a continuous process that needs
attention from the beginning of the project; you can't do it at the
last minute.

Cheers,
Art

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Good Day Art and Natalie,

If you are looking at only spelling and grammar, perhaps. However, the
problems encountered at our site deal more with content (complete
procedures, no link from the help file to an application's Help buttons,
lack of option and data column descriptions, and more) and the structure of
documents.

A couple of years ago our expert (of spelling and grammer) reviewed a
contractor's publication and offered a couple of comments. What the expert
had missed was the description of the software application was backwards of
the application's actual purpose and operation.

Afraid I must say that proofing a document depends upon the purpose of that
proofing.

Best,

 Denise L. Moss-Fritch

-- Original message --
From: "Art Campbell" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>

> In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's
> a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling
> and grammar skills.
>
> If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be
> the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at
> it with fresh eyes.
>
> But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller /
> grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job.
>
> Art
>
>
>
> On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher wrote:
> > This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
> > writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofin g of the
> > documents you write? Should it ever be the writer?




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RE: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread John Sgammato
I am a lone writer, so I am ultimately responsible for the docs. I have no 
editor, proofreader, or any suport whatever. I try to get someone from QA to go 
over everything, but that seldom happens. Even when it does, I go over it 
myself. 
 
The problem is that a non-writer can get quite exhausted and careless or 
resentful looking at every character, while a trained writer can skim a lot and 
focus on the places most likely to have problems.  When you are responsible for 
14 books and 6 online helps and a bunch of small end-user documents and other 
auxiliary docs, it really is quicker for the writer to do it, if s/he can 
develop the discipline. 
 
 



From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] on behalf of Natalie Bircher
Sent: Fri 12/15/2006 2:29 PM
To: framers@lists.frameusers.com
Subject: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?



This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the
documents you write? Should it ever be the writer?







Natalie Bircher

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Phone: 320-634-3841

Fax: 320-634-1349

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Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread d . mossfritch
Good Day Art and Natalie,

If you are looking at only spelling and grammar, perhaps. However, the problems 
encountered at our site deal more with content (complete procedures, no link 
from the help file to an application's Help buttons, lack of option and data 
column descriptions, and more) and the structure of documents.

A couple of years ago our expert (of spelling and grammer) reviewed a 
contractor's publication and offered a couple of comments. What the expert had 
missed was the description of the software application was backwards of the 
application's actual purpose and operation.

Afraid I must say that proofing a document depends upon the purpose of that 
proofing.

Best,

 Denise L. Moss-Fritch

-- Original message -- 
From: "Art Campbell" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> 

> In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's 
> a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling 
> and grammar skills. 
> 
> If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be 
> the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at 
> it with fresh eyes. 
> 
> But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller / 
> grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job. 
> 
> Art 
> 
> 
> 
> On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher wrote: 
> > This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as 
> > writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the 
> > documents you write? Should it ever be the writer? 
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Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Rick Quatro

Hi Natalie,

It is bad practice for a writer or typesetter to proofread their own work. I 
worked at one shop where you would get fired for doing so. You always handed 
the document off to a professional staff proofreader.


Rick Quatro
Carmen Publishing
585-659-8267
www.frameexpert.com

This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the
documents you write? Should it ever be the writer?


Natalie Bircher

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Phone: 320-634-3841

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Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]

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Re: OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Art Campbell

In practical terms, it should be the person who gets zinged if there's
a mistake and/or the person in the organization with the best spelling
and grammar skills.

If you're asking a process question, I'd say no, it should never be
the writer because he/she has looked at the copy too much to look at
it with fresh eyes.

But back in practical terms, if the writer is the best speller /
grammarian, he/she is likely to get stuck with the job.

Art



On 12/15/06, Natalie Bircher <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the
documents you write? Should it ever be the writer?





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OT - Who should be responsible for proofing?

2006-12-15 Thread Natalie Bircher
This is off topic, but something that we all must come across as
writers. Who should be responsible for the final proofing of the
documents you write? Should it ever be the writer? 

 

 

 

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