[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-radext-rfc4590bis-01.txt

Hi, RFC 3579, which appears in the References, is an Informational RFC (i.e., it is a down reference). Meaning this should appear in section 9.2 instead of 9.1? Or that the text should some somehow refer back to some standard reference versus rfc3579. Sorry for my ignorant question. it i

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-radext-rfc4590bis-01.txt

On Tue, 22 May 2007, 1:57pm, Gonzalo Camarillo wRote: Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other La

RE: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ltans-ers-13.txt

Ok, after conferring with Carl: We will remove both unused references. (reasons: The references are not so important and when LTAP will become RFC later, it will reference the ERS RFC.) Tobias > -Original Message- > From: Russ Housley [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: Monday, May 21, 2

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dnsext-nsec3-10

<[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote on 05/18/2007 02:06:50 PM: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-syn-flood-04

Wesley, I read your draft on "TCP SYN Flooding Attacks and Common Mitigations" as part of my work as a Gen-ART reviewer. Below some feedback. (For background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or

[Gen-art] Re: review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-ero-01.txt

Thanks for your review! Authors, can you send me OLD/NEW style edits for these and I'll add an RFC Editor's note to do these. Francis, what are the comments from Brian? Have they been posted somewhere? Jari Francis Dupont kirjoitti: > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-A

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-ero-01.txt

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: d