Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dmm-mag-multihoming-04

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kühlewind
Thanks for you review! I also noted your second point in my AD review to make sure it gets addressed! > Am 25.07.2017 um 23:36 schrieb Robert Sparks : > > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-curdle-des-des-des-die-die-die-04

2017-07-31 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27

2017-07-31 Thread Christer Holmberg
PR updated. Regards, Christer -Original Message- From: Paul Kyzivat [mailto:pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu] Sent: 31 July 2017 18:03 To: Christer Holmberg ; Ben Campbell Cc: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp@ietf.org; General Area Review Team

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-aria-srtp-10

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)
Thanks for the review! > Am 10.07.2017 um 20:40 schrieb Meral Shirazipour > : > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pceps-14

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)
Hi Dale, thanks for the detailed review and follow up. I fully agree with your points and am happy to see that these have been resolved quickly (also added a few more comments in my AD ballot)! Mirja > Am 12.07.2017 um 05:08 schrieb Dale Worley : > > Reviewer: Dale

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27

2017-07-31 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 7/31/17 4:05 AM, Christer Holmberg wrote: Hi Paul, PR created: https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-dtls-sdp/pull/34 This leaves RFC5763 in an inconsistent state: - the reference to 8122 in section 5 isn't backed up with an entry in the references section In the PR, I DO add 8122 to the

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc5988bis-05

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kühlewind
Thanks for the review! > Am 24.05.2017 um 18:49 schrieb Stewart Bryant : > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-urnbis-ns-reg-transition-08

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kühlewind
Thanks for the review! > Am 06.07.2017 um 20:40 schrieb Joel Halpern : > > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-scsi-03

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kühlewind
Thanks for the review. > Am 30.06.2017 um 17:43 schrieb Robert Sparks : > > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)
Thanks for the review! > Am 07.07.2017 um 06:07 schrieb Brian Carpenter : > > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review result: Ready > > Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-lsp-fastreroute-09.txt

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)
One comment: there is an update to rfc2119 to clarify the use of not upper cases musts and should aso. published since May -> see rfc8174 > Am 31.07.2017 um 15:29 schrieb Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF) : > > Thanks for the review! > >> Am 08.07.2017 um 11:01 schrieb Francis

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-lsp-fastreroute-09.txt

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)
Thanks for the review! > Am 08.07.2017 um 11:01 schrieb Francis Dupont : > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-early-hints-04

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)
Thanks for the review! > Am 28.07.2017 um 23:08 schrieb Wassim Haddad : > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt

2017-07-31 Thread Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)
Thanks for the review! > Am 11.07.2017 um 12:15 schrieb Francis Dupont : > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27

2017-07-31 Thread Christer Holmberg
Hi Paul, >> PR created: >> >> https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-dtls-sdp/pull/34 > >This leaves RFC5763 in an inconsistent state: >- the reference to 8122 in section 5 isn't backed up with an entry in the >references section In the PR, I DO add 8122 to the reference section of 5763 :) >- there