Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-04

2018-05-22 Thread Ron Bonica
Thanks! > -Original Message- > From: Wassim Haddad > Sent: Monday, May 21, 2018 4:41 PM > To: gen-art > Cc: Wassim Haddad ; draft-ietf-v6ops- > conditional-ras@ietf.org > Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07

2017-12-06 Thread Ron Bonica
Works for me. > -Original Message- > From: Stewart Bryant [mailto:stewart.bry...@gmail.com] > Sent: Wednesday, December 6, 2017 12:19 PM > To: Ron Bonica <rbon...@juniper.net>; Joel M. Halpern > <j...@joelhalpern.com>; gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-i

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07

2017-12-06 Thread Ron Bonica
. Ron > -Original Message- > From: Stewart Bryant [mailto:stewart.bry...@gmail.com] > Sent: Wednesday, December 6, 2017 6:24 AM > To: Ron Bonica <rbon...@juniper.net>; Joel M. Halpern > <j...@joelhalpern.com>; gen-art@ietf.org >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07

2017-12-04 Thread Ron Bonica
t: Monday, December 4, 2017 4:19 PM > To: Ron Bonica <rbon...@juniper.net>; gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-intarea-probe@ietf.org; int-a...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org > Subject: Re: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07 > > Thank you Ron. > > On the E-b

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07

2017-12-04 Thread Ron Bonica
Hi Joel, Thanks for the review. Responses inline.. Ron > -Original Message- > From: Joel Halpern [mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com] > Sent: Thursday, November 30, 2017 4:45 PM > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-intarea-probe@ietf.org;

Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host

2017-05-09 Thread Ron Bonica
Joel M. Halpern [mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com] > Sent: Monday, May 8, 2017 8:31 PM > To: Brzozowski, John <john_brzozow...@comcast.com>; Ron Bonica > <rbon...@juniper.net>; Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com>; > Van De Velde, Gunter (Nokia - BE/Antwerp)

Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host

2017-05-08 Thread Ron Bonica
Joel, Are you OK with the change that Brian recommends, below? Ron > -Original Message- > From: Ron Bonica > Sent: Saturday, May 6, 2017 8:36 PM > To: 'Brian E Carpenter' <brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com>; Van De Veld

Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host

2017-05-06 Thread Ron Bonica
Wfm Joel, are you ok with this? Ron > -Original Message- > From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com] > Sent: Friday, May 5, 2017 4:06 PM > To: Ron Bonica <rbon...@juniper.net>; Van De Velde, Gunter (Nokia - > BE/Antwe

Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host

2017-05-05 Thread Ron Bonica
Gunter, Thanks much. A brief chat with Joel may clear this up. Ron > -Original Message- > From: Van De Velde, Gunter (Nokia - BE/Antwerp) > [mailto:gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com] > Sent: Friday, May 5, 2017 2:47 AM > To: Ron Bonica <r

[Gen-art] draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host

2017-05-04 Thread Ron Bonica
Folks, The following is status for draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host: - WG last call complete - OPSDIR, GENART and INTDIR reviews complete - write-up complete The following issue was raised in the GENART Review: " The proposed status seems questionable. We as a community are not

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-nd-04.txt

2017-03-01 Thread Ron Bonica
Hi Jari, Sorry for the slow response. We worked all of Francis' comments into the draft except for one. In his first comment, Francis suggests that the title is misleading. We asked for a better title but got no response. If Francis can recommend a better title, there is still time to change

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-nd-04.txt

2017-02-21 Thread Ron Bonica
Francis, Thanks for the careful review. Can you suggest a better title? Ron P.S. I have worked the other comments into the next version of the draft. > -Original Message- > From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Cerveny, Bill

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-09

2016-08-29 Thread Ron Bonica
viewer: Ron Bonica Review Date: 2016-09-29 IETF LC End Date: 2016-11-08 IETF Telechat Date: 2016-09-15 Summary: This document is ready for publication. Major Issues: None Minor Issues

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sipcore-dns-dual-stack

2016-07-30 Thread Ron Bonica
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-dns-dual-stack Reviewer:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mboned-lightweight-igmpv3-mldv2-05.txt

2009-09-02 Thread Ron Bonica
minimal. There has been extensive comments on this proposal during the working group meetings. Personnel Lenny Giuliano is the Document Shepherd, Ron Bonica is the Responsible Area Director. RFC Editor Note (Insert RFC Editor Note here or remove section) IRTF Note (Insert IRTF

[Gen-art] Re: review of draft-ietf-mpls-icmp-08.txt

2007-03-09 Thread Ron Bonica
Francis, Yes, I also wish that we could have applied the ICMP extensions to the ICMPv6 Packet Too Big message. Unfortunately, there are no unused bits in that message. So, we couldn't add a length attribute. And without a length attribute, we couldn't add an extension structure.

[Gen-art] draft-bonica-internet-icmp-16

2007-01-27 Thread Ron Bonica
Folks, Please accept version 16 of this draft. I catches a few nits that were left on version 15 (submitted last night). Ron Internet R. Bonica Internet-Draft

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-bonica-internet-icmp-14

2007-01-26 Thread Ron Bonica
Hi Sharon, Thanks for the thoughtful review. Lots of responses inline, below. I have attached a new version of the draft which I will post in a bit. Ron Sharon Chisholm wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this

[Gen-art] Genart Review for draft-ietf-dkim-base-06

2006-11-27 Thread Ron Bonica
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft, currently on an IESG telechat agenda. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. IMO, this draft is very will thought out and ready for publication.

[Gen-art] draft-ietf-crisp-iris-common-transport-03

2006-08-28 Thread Ron Bonica
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft, currently on an IESG telechat agenda. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. IMO, this draft is well written and ready for publication. Can I assume that this schema is already

[Gen-art] Re: draft-ietf-crisp-iris-common-transport-03

2006-08-28 Thread Ron Bonica
Resend. There was a small cut-and-paste error on the last attempt. -r Ron Bonica wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft, currently on an IESG telechat agenda. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art

[Gen-art] Re: Genart review for draft-ietf-ipfix-info-12

2006-07-31 Thread Ron Bonica
I have no further comments on this document. -ron Ron Bonica wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft, currently on an IESG telechat agenda. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html

[Gen-art] Re: Genart review for draft-ietf-pkix-lightweight-ocsp-profile-05

2006-07-12 Thread Ron Bonica
OK. I guess you have addressed all of my comments. -r Deacon, Alex wrote: Hi, Thanks for your comments. My responses are included inline. -Original Message- From: Ron Bonica [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Wednesday, July 05, 2006 11:23 AM To: Deacon, Alex

[Gen-art] Genart review for draft-ietf-pkix-lightweight-ocsp-profile-05

2006-07-05 Thread Ron Bonica
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft, currently on an IESG telechat agenda. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

[Gen-art] Re: Genart review of draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-05 / draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-05

2006-06-08 Thread Ron Bonica
Ok. In that case, you are fine. The MIB Rx is the MIB Doctor Review group. Your AD will introduce you to them somewhere in the process. Ron [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: Hi Ron, Thanks for the review, see below for some answers Ron Bonica wrote: I am the assigned Gen

[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ipfix-architecture

2006-05-10 Thread Ron Bonica
This document is well written and ready for publication. -r ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-iptel-tel-np-09

2006-04-25 Thread Ron Bonica
Attached is my review of the specified document, submitted as part of the Gen-ART process. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Document: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-iptel-tel-np-09.txt Comments: The