Re: [Gen-art] [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

2018-10-10 Thread Alissa Cooper
Joel, thanks for your reviews. Martin, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot. I do think the new text in Section 1 helps clarify the scope of the server’s responsibility (for me, at least). Alissa > On Oct 4, 2018, at 8:35 AM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: > > I had thought we

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-10-10 Thread Alissa Cooper
Francesa, thanks for your review. Dave, thanks for your responses. I entered a DISCUSS ballot based on the issue raised about unused citations. Typically the abstract does contain an explanation of the document(s) being updated. In this case the list is so long that I’m not sure it’s worth it.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13

2018-10-10 Thread Alissa Cooper
Erik, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Sep 26, 2018, at 3:57 PM, Erik Kline > wrote: > > Reviewer: Erik Kline > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all

Re: [Gen-art] [Netconf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06

2018-10-10 Thread Alissa Cooper
Erik, thanks for your review. Martin, thanks for your response. I agree that “checksum” is a misnomer here and don’t really understand why it was picked, but at least the text explains that it isn’t a checksum. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Oct 1, 2018, at 3:08 AM, Martin

Re: [Gen-art] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13: (with COMMENT)

2018-10-10 Thread Dave Crocker
On 10/10/2018 12:54 PM, Alissa Cooper wrote: The Gen-ART review for attrleaf is athttps://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/dq-cwawY1UqoGJWFUxQPuWv0oPc. hmmm. I see that its addressing should have reached me but I'm not finding a copy in my mail archive. Thanks for the pointer: From:

Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05

2018-10-10 Thread Alissa Cooper
Elwyn, thanks for your reviews. Ian, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Oct 5, 2018, at 8:37 AM, ianfar...@gmx.com wrote: > > Hi Elwyn, > > Good catch on the points below. They’re fixed in the new version. > > Thanks, > Ian > >> On 4. Oct 2018, at

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10

2018-10-10 Thread Alissa Cooper
Linda, thanks for your reviews of this document. Authors, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Sep 21, 2018, at 5:27 PM, Linda Dunbar wrote: > > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-multihomed-prefix-lfa-07

2018-10-10 Thread Elwyn Davies
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For