Meral, thanks for your review.
We will incorporate your comment to the next version.
Best regards,
Jeong-dong
보낸 사람 : Meral Shirazipour meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com
보낸 날짜 : 2014-06-23 16:06:04 ( +09:00 )
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제목 : Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-06-23
IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-23
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have some
comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 8], Section 4.1
the commitment of the shared resources are be coordinated--missing
'to'--the commitment of the shared resources are to be coordinated
Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com
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