RE: Late Last Call Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-rfc4749-dtx-update-01

2008-09-23 Thread Roni Even
Hi, This text is just relevant to G.729.1 and not to other codecs, so if you want to add a reason for the SHOULD it should be based on RFC4749 implementations that would not send M=1. Maybe the text should say that if DTX is offered the sender must set the M bit according to RFC 3551. Roni

RE: Late Last Call Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-rfc4749-dtx-update-01

2008-09-26 Thread Roni Even
the SHOULD by a MUST in the current text. What option seems the best? Aurelien -Message d'origine- De : Roni Even [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Envoyé : mardi 23 septembre 2008 12:46 À : 'Spencer Dawkins'; SOLLAUD Aurelien RD-CORE-LAN Cc : [EMAIL PROTECTED]; ietf@ietf.org; [EMAIL PROTECTED

RE: [P2PSIP] P2PSIP diagnostics: PING discussion

2008-11-13 Thread Roni Even
which may add skew but it is not because of NTP. Roni Even From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of Das, Saumitra Sent: Wednesday, November 12, 2008 11:31 AM To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Cc: ietf@ietf.org Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] P2PSIP diagnostics: PING discussion Hi Song

RE: [P2PSIP] How to describe the processing power

2008-11-13 Thread Roni Even
usage are good but the question is if they are relevant for the decision since the user may limit the amount of resources it wants to allocate for the p2p application. This may be based on percentage from the link or number of connections. Roni Even From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL

RE: Request for community guidance on issue concerning a future meeting of the IETF

2009-09-19 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I support this view. Furthermore I believe that even though people are allowed to have their opinions about a specific country politics or values the IETF is not the place to bring them forward regardless of the meeting location. The IETF is a technical body and not the UN. Roni Even

RE: Request for community guidance on issue concerning a future meeting of the IETF

2009-09-19 Thread Roni Even
Melinda, I see a difference between addressing requirements for protocol that address national regulatory services and voicing an opinion about national regulatory policies. I also noticed that the issues raised on the mailing list were wider than national regulatory services Roni Even

RE: WG Review: Internet Wideband Audio Codec (codec)

2009-12-23 Thread Roni Even
parties, which means that the codec may change by the IETF anyhow. Thanks Roni Even -Original Message- From: ietf-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:ietf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Robert Elz Sent: Wednesday, December 23, 2009 10:40 PM To: Tschofenig, Hannes (NSN - FI/Espoo) Cc: i

RE: WG Review: Internet Wideband Audio Codec (codec)

2009-12-23 Thread Roni Even
parties, which means that the codec may change by the IETF anyhow. Thanks Roni Even -Original Message- From: ietf-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:ietf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Robert Elz Sent: Wednesday, December 23, 2009 10:40 PM To: Tschofenig, Hannes (NSN - FI/Espoo) Cc: i

RE: WG Review: Internet Wideband Audio Codec (codec)

2009-12-24 Thread Roni Even
Hi, In line Roni Even -Original Message- From: k...@munnari.oz.au [mailto:k...@munnari.oz.au] Sent: Thursday, December 24, 2009 11:47 AM To: Roni Even Cc: 'Tschofenig, Hannes (NSN - FI/Espoo)'; i...@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; co...@ietf.org Subject: Re: WG Review: Internet Wideband

RE: WG Review: Internet Wideband Audio Codec (codec)

2010-01-05 Thread Roni Even
there is enough knowledge to evaluate the work by the participants. I am also curious about which area should have this WG, I am not sure it is RAI work, in the past there were discussions if even AVT should be in RAI or transport. Roni Even -Original Message- From: ietf-boun...@ietf.org

RE: [codec] WG Review: Internet Wideband Audio Codec (codec)

2010-01-11 Thread Roni Even
Hannes, To me the discussion suggests that what is missing in the charter is a requirement for a gap analysis document after finalizing the requirements. There was an email from Cullen on January 7th discussing this point Roni Even -Original Message- From: ietf-boun...@ietf.org

RE: [codec] WG Review: Internet Wideband Audio Codec (codec)

2010-01-13 Thread Roni Even
Hi Jean-Marc, I was happy to see your sentence especially the fact that what we are proposing here is to take *four* non-standard codecs and make one standard codec out of them. I hope that the charter will be strict about that. Roni Even -Original Message- From: codec-boun

RE: [codec] WG Review: Internet Wideband Audio Codec (codec)

2010-01-19 Thread Roni Even
Hi Sjoerd, I noticed that you mentioned that you ran into these situations, can you be more specific about what were the requirements, which codec were considered and why they were not good for your customers. This may help with selecting a good codec. Thanks Roni Even -Original Message

RE: Public musing on the nature of IETF membership and employment status

2010-04-08 Thread Roni Even
If this is true it make me wonder why does the IETF care about the affiliation of WG chairs and ADs Roni Even From: ietf-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:ietf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Mark Atwood Sent: Tuesday, April 06, 2010 7:17 PM To: ietf@ietf.org Subject: Public musing on the nature

Gen-ART LC review of draft-reschke-webdav-post-06

2010-04-12 Thread Roni Even
-reschke-webdav-post-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-04-12 IETF LC End Date: 2010-05-07 IESG Telechat date: (if known): Summary: This draft is roughly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I have three nits of which I am not sure since I am reading this draft without

Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-turner-asymmetrickeyformat-05

2010-04-18 Thread Roni Even
. Document: draft-turner-asymmetrickeyformat-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-4-18 IESG Telechat date: 2010-4-22 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I have some nits Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 7 what you are registering

RE: Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-turner-asymmetrickeyformat-05

2010-04-18 Thread Roni Even
the specific registries is important. I know that they are not maintained by IANA but hopefully someone is maintain them and need to be notified of these two OIDs allocations. Thanks Roni Even -Original Message- From: Sean Turner [mailto:turn...@ieca.com] Sent: Sunday, April 18, 2010 8:37 PM

RE: Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-turner-asymmetrickeyformat-05

2010-04-18 Thread Roni Even
Hi, This was my question, if you registered the OIDs then it is OK. Roni Even -Original Message- From: Sean Turner [mailto:turn...@ieca.com] Sent: Sunday, April 18, 2010 11:19 PM To: Roni Even Cc: 'General Area Review Team'; ietf@ietf.org; draft-turner- asymmetrickeyformat

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-csi-send-cert

2010-05-02 Thread Roni Even
-ietf-csi-send-cert-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-05-02 IETF LC End Date: 2010-05-14 IESG Telechat date: (if known): Summary: This draft is roughly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I have some comments and nits: Comments: The first two comments are about changes from

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-csi-send-cert

2010-05-03 Thread Roni Even
-ietf-csi-send-cert-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-05-02 IETF LC End Date: 2010-05-14 IESG Telechat date: (if known): Summary: This draft is roughly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I have some comments and nits: Comments: The first two comments are about changes from

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-yam-5321bis-smtp-pre-evaluation-05

2010-05-17 Thread Roni Even
. Document: draft-ietf-yam-5321bis-smtp-pre-evaluation-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-05-17 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: (if known): 2010-05-20 Summary: This draft is not meant to be published. This memo is a Preliminary Evaluation of RFC5321, Simple Mail Transfer Protocol

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-yam-5321bis-smtp-pre-evaluation-05

2010-05-18 Thread Roni Even
interoperable implementations, the specification may advance to the Draft Standard level only if those options or features are removed. Roni Even -Original Message- From: SM [mailto:s...@resistor.net] Sent: Tuesday, May 18, 2010 12:37 PM To: Roni Even Cc: ietf@ietf.org Subject

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-yam-5321bis-smtp-pre-evaluation-05

2010-05-18 Thread Roni Even
OK Thanks Roni -Original Message- From: Tony Hansen [mailto:t...@att.com] Sent: Tuesday, May 18, 2010 3:29 PM To: Roni Even Cc: dcroc...@bbiw.net; 'General Area Review Team'; draft-ietf-yam- 5321bis-smtp-pre-evaluation@tools.ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC

RE: [AVT] Fwd: I-D Action:draft-zimmermann-avt-zrtp-20.txt

2010-06-04 Thread Roni Even
are disruptive, and force a re-negotiation of the secure session. If so, the draft needs to state this explicitly. Roni Even -Original Message- From: avt-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:avt-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Philip Zimmermann Sent: Thursday, June 03, 2010 7:31 AM To: ETF Discussion

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-nsis-applicability-mobility-signaling-17

2010-06-13 Thread Roni Even
-mobility-signaling-17 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: IETF LC End Date: 2010-06-17 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft where type is Informational is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. Section 6 says

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-nsis-applicability-mobility-signaling-17

2010-06-14 Thread Roni Even
-mobility-signaling-17 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: IETF LC End Date: 2010-06-17 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft where type is Informational is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. Section 6 says

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-meth-21

2010-06-22 Thread Roni Even
-meth-21 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: IETF LC End Date: 2010-06-25 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. There are some nits. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. All over the document

RE: [dispatch] VIPR - proposed charter version 3

2010-06-30 Thread Roni Even
the carriers object to implement it and not due to any other reason like preferences of enterprises IT to use PSTN for calls because of better quality of service and manageability. Roni Even -Original Message- From: dispatch-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:dispatch-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-msec-ipsec-group-counter-modes-05

2010-07-12 Thread Roni Even
-group-counter-modes-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: July 12, 2010 IETF LC End Date: 2010-07-23 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard RFC. The document is short, easy to read and I have no comments. Major issues: Minor

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-msec-ipsec-group-counter-modes-05

2010-07-13 Thread Roni Even
-group-counter-modes-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: July 12, 2010 IETF LC End Date: 2010-07-23 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard RFC. The document is short, easy to read and I have no comments. Major issues: Minor

Gen-ART LC review of draft-thaler-v6ops-teredo-extensions-07

2010-08-04 Thread Roni Even
-07 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: August 4, 2010 IETF LC End Date: 2010-08-12 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is roughly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I have some comments: Major issues: None Minor issues: 1. In section 4.1 defines type

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mif-problem-statement-07

2010-08-24 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: August 24, 2010 IETF LC End Date: 2010-08-23 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication where the intended type is informational. I have a comment: Reading the document it looks to me that the problem statement described

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-04

2010-10-03 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2010-10-03 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 2010-10-7 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: ___ Ietf mailing

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-04

2010-10-04 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2010-10-03 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 2010-10-7 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: ___ Ietf mailing

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-08

2010-10-25 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2010-10-25 IETF LC End Date: 2010-11-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 2 why not reference RFC 2119 or at least copy the definition from

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-08

2010-10-26 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2010-10-25 IETF LC End Date: 2010-11-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 2 why not reference RFC 2119 or at least copy the definition from

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-08

2010-11-27 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I sent the following review on October 25th but did not see and response. Roni Even I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-protect-control-plane-04

2010-11-28 Thread Roni Even
-control-plane-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-11-28 IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-3 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. There are some nits and minor issue. Major issues: Minor issues: The example in appendix

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-protect-control-plane-04

2010-11-28 Thread Roni Even
- From: Rodney Dunn [mailto:rod...@cisco.com] Sent: Sunday, November 28, 2010 6:09 PM To: Joel Jaeggli Cc: Roni Even; General Area Review Team; IETF-Discussion list; draft- ietf-opsec-protect-control-plane@tools.ietf.org Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-protect-control- plane

RE: Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-08

2010-11-29 Thread Roni Even
Hi Joe, Thanks Inline Roni -Original Message- From: Joe Salowey [mailto:jsalo...@cisco.com] Sent: Monday, November 29, 2010 7:42 AM To: Roni Even Cc: 'General Area Review Team'; draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel- req@tools.ietf.org; 'IETF-Discussion list' Subject: Re: Gen-ART last call

Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary

2010-12-04 Thread Roni Even
-servicelistboundary-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-12-04 IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-14 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. There are some nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-roll-routing-metrics-14

2010-12-20 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2010-12-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-1-5 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Standard track RFC. Major issues: No Major issues Minor issues: 1. In section 2.1 after figure 1 you specify the different fields

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sipcore-keep-10

2010-12-28 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2010-12-28 IETF LC End Date: 2011-1-5 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In the document you mention that the keep alive can be negotiated in each direction. I

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sipcore-keep-10

2011-01-01 Thread Roni Even
Hi Christer, I am OK with all your responses regards Roni -Original Message- From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmb...@ericsson.com] Sent: Saturday, January 01, 2011 12:20 PM To: Roni Even; gen-...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-sipcore- keep@tools.ietf.org Cc: 'IETF-Discussion

RE: Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary

2011-01-02 Thread Roni Even
Hi Karl, I looked at the 05 version and it does not look like you fixed the nits Roni From: Karl Heinz Wolf [mailto:karlheinz.w...@nic.at] Sent: Friday, December 17, 2010 10:28 AM To: Roni Even; General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary@tools.ietf.org Cc: IETF

Gen-ART LC review of draft-turner-ekpct-algs-update-02

2011-01-23 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-1-23 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-8 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standard track RFC. Major issues: none Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None ___ Ietf

Gen-ART LC review of draft-arkko-dual-stack-extra-lite

2011-01-24 Thread Roni Even
-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-1-24 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication. Major issues: Minor issues: This document has a standard track intended status. It looks to me more of informational type. Nits

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map-14

2011-01-24 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-1-23 IETF LC End Date: 2011-1-24 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. The document starts with Contributors

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map-14

2011-01-31 Thread Roni Even
Yaakov, Yes this is what I mean Roni From: Yaakov Stein [mailto:yaako...@rad.com] Sent: Thursday, January 27, 2011 5:47 PM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map@tools.ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org Cc: 'IETF-Discussion list' Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-shim6-multihome-shim-api-15

2011-02-01 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-2-1 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 8.2 the path exploration parameters are different from RFC 5534

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-shim6-multihome-shim-api-15

2011-02-06 Thread Roni Even
Hi Shinta, I am OK with all your proposals Thanks Roni -Original Message- From: Shinta Sugimoto [mailto:shi...@sfc.wide.ad.jp] Sent: Sunday, February 06, 2011 3:29 PM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-ietf-shim6-multihome-shim-api@tools.ietf.org; gen- a...@ietf.org; 'IETF-Discussion list

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-morg-multimailbox-search-06

2011-02-20 Thread Roni Even
-search-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-2-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Experimental RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-morg-multimailbox-search-06

2011-02-22 Thread Roni Even
-search-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-2-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Experimental RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None

Gen-ART LC review of draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04

2011-03-04 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-3-4 IETF LC End Date: 2011-3-18 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In section 5 and in section 6.1 second bullet you mention that the end to end connection is TCP

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04

2011-03-07 Thread Roni Even
Hi, My impression from reading the document and according to figure 1 was that all end host communication was done in a UDP tunnel. So what is the relation of the TCP connection to BTMM. Roni Even From: Lixia Zhang [mailto:li...@cs.ucla.edu] Sent: Sunday, March 06, 2011 7:52 AM To: Roni

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-community-06

2011-03-10 Thread Roni Even
-community-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-3-10 IETF LC End Date: 2011-3-18 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 1 The returned list of I-Ds and/or RFCs includes five

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-community-07

2011-04-09 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I reviewed version 7 and all my comments were addressed. Roni Even -Original Message- From: Paul Hoffman [mailto:paul.hoff...@vpnc.org] Sent: Friday, March 11, 2011 6:08 AM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-community@tools.ietf.org; gen- a...@ietf.org; 'IETF

Gen-ART LC review of draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-03

2011-04-11 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-4-11 IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 8.5 and 8.6 the draft says that If no more password pre-processing

GEn-ART last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-dual-stack-lite-07

2011-04-11 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-4-10 IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-12 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as standard track RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 8.3 NAT-44 appears without

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-03

2011-04-22 Thread Roni Even
may not find an interoperable mode. If the initiator will use none technique than you will have interoperability. Roni -Original Message- From: Dan Harkins [mailto:dhark...@lounge.org] Sent: Friday, April 22, 2011 3:39 AM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-grow-geomrt-01

2011-04-26 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-4-26 IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-29 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: This is more out of curiosity 1. Why not include it in draft-ietf-grow-mrt-14 2. Why

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09

2011-05-24 Thread Roni Even
-09 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-5-24 IETF LC End Date: 2011-5-30 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Need to expand LDP when first mentioned. 2

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09

2011-05-24 Thread Roni Even
Farrel [mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk] Sent: Tuesday, May 24, 2011 1:16 PM To: 'Roni Even'; draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced- dsmap@tools.ietf.org Cc: gen-...@ietf.org; 'IETF-Discussion list' Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced- dsmap-09 Thanks Roni, Nits

Gen-ART LC review of draft-faltstrom-5892bis-04

2011-05-29 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-5-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-6-6 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: 1. I am not sure how the IANA consideration section is in-line with the IANA consideration section of RFC5892

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ftpext2-hosts-02

2011-06-24 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-6-21 IETF LC End Date: 2011-6-30 IESG Telechat date: 2011-6-30 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: ___ Ietf

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-roll-of0-14

2011-06-27 Thread Roni Even
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-roll-of0-14 Reviewer: Roni

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-6man-flow-3697bis-05

2011-07-06 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-7-6 IETF LC End Date: 2011-7-13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. One nit Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 3 fifth paragraph An alternative approach

Gen-ART last call review of draft-yevstifeyev-ion-report-06

2011-07-30 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-7-31 IETF LC End Date: 2011-8-9 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: I read in section 3.2 The IESG has determined that IONs will not be used in the future

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-meth-23

2011-08-16 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-8-16 IETF LC End Date: 2011-8-19 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: I find that the document provides in depth testing procedures and reporting. What I

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-grow-geomrt-05

2011-08-19 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-8-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-8-26 IESG Telechat date: 2011-8-25 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Section 5 This section is to aide should

Gen-ART LC review of draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn-07

2011-09-07 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-9-7 IETF LC End Date: 2011-9-27 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is not ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: The IANA considerations section says: the values already allocated are in Table 1 of Section 4. The allocation

RE: [payload] [Payload] Last Call: draft-ietf-payload-rfc3189bis-02.txt (RTP Payload Format for DV (IEC 61834) Video)) to Proposed Standard

2011-09-26 Thread Roni Even
Hi Qin, Thanks for the review see inline Roni From: payload-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:payload-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Qin Wu Sent: Tuesday, September 20, 2011 9:16 AM To: ietf@ietf.org Cc: payl...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [payload] [Payload] Last Call: draft-ietf-payload-rfc3189bis-02.txt

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-drinks-usecases-requirements-06

2011-09-29 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-9-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-3 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments

GenART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis-01

2011-10-01 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-1 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: I noticed that the major change from RFC 3462 in the current version is to remove

RE: GenART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis-01

2011-10-02 Thread Roni Even
other behavior. Can the sender of the report know if it can send the report in another multipart MIME message. Thanks Roni Even From: Murray S. Kucherawy [mailto:m...@cloudmark.com] Sent: Monday, October 03, 2011 7:29 AM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis@tools.ietf.org Cc: gen

RE: GenART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis-01

2011-10-03 Thread Roni Even
/* MIME parts). There has not been any report of interoperability problems as a result. This factored into the working group's consensus. -MSK From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even@gmail.com] Sent: Sunday, October 02, 2011 10:51 PM To: Murray S. Kucherawy; draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mip4-nemo-haaro-06

2011-10-29 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-31 IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3 Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. The IANA section is not clear. It talks about three new tables

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00

2011-10-29 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-20 IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: I noticed that the example in section 3

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis-02

2011-10-30 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-30 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-23 IESG Telechat date: 2011-12-1 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07

2011-10-30 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-30 IETF LC End Date: 2011-11-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: I do not have any editorial issues but I am not sure about the value of the document. I saw the IESG

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-mib

2011-11-20 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-11-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-11-29 IESG Telechat date: 2011-12-1 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: The last sentence in section 5.10 (TBD ...) hints

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14

2012-01-01 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2012-1-1 IETF LC End Date: 2012-1-4 IESG Telechat date: 2012-1-5 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3.2 Type and VSS Information -- see

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn-07

2012-01-12 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I looked at the 08 version and the major issues are addressed. What about minor issue number 3? Roni Even -Original Message- From: Kireeti Kompella [mailto:kire...@juniper.net] Sent: Friday, September 16, 2011 10:23 PM To: Roni Even Cc: Kireeti Kompella; draft-kompella-l2vpn

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn-07

2012-01-13 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I am OK with minor issue 2 now. Issue 3 was my only point Roni -Original Message- From: Kireeti Kompella [mailto:kire...@juniper.net] Sent: Friday, January 13, 2012 7:36 PM To: Roni Even Cc: Kireeti Kompella; draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn@tools.ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org

Gen-ART LC review of draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-06

2012-01-24 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-1-24 IETF LC End Date: 2012-2-14 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Section 2 bullet 3 Securty? 2. In section

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dnsext-ecdsa-04

2012-01-29 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2012-1-29 IETF LC End Date: 2012-2-7 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: The first IANA action is to update http://www.iana.org/assignments/ds-rr-types/ds-rr-types.txt which requires

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-3-in-1-encoding-08

2012-02-22 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-2-23 IETF LC End Date: 2012-2-23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 1 4th paragraph tunnelling

GenART last call review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03

2012-03-13 Thread Roni Even
-analysis-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-3-13 IETF LC End Date: 2012-3-22 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 5.1.1 third paragraph change to provided by some

Gen-ART LC review of draft-melnikov-smtp-priority-09

2012-03-13 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-3-13 IETF LC End Date: 2012-3-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 4.2 In absence of both the MT-PRIORITY MAIL FROM parameter

RE: [AVTCORE] IPR requirements in document write-up

2012-03-21 Thread Roni Even
suggest you ask it in a way that allows you to accurately answer the question asked in the PROTO template. Barry, incoming Applications AD Original Message From: Stephan Wenger [mailto:st...@stewe.org] Sent: Sunday, March 18, 2012 7:03 PM To: Roni Even; 'IETF AVTCore

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-02

2012-04-01 Thread Roni Even
. Document: draft-ietf-ancp-pon-02 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-4-1 IETF LC End Date: 2012-3-30 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 4 However

Gen-ART LC review of draft-melnikov-smtp-priority-13

2012-05-20 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-5-20 IETF LC End Date: 2012-5-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. MUA is used but not expanded.

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix-05

2012-05-23 Thread Roni Even
. Document: draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-4-7 IETF LC End Date: 2012-4-17 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In sections 2, 4.1 (PANA-L7), 5

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix-05

2012-05-29 Thread Roni Even
Hi Benoit, Your proposals are OK with me Roni From: Benoit Claise [mailto:bcla...@cisco.com] Sent: Wednesday, May 30, 2012 2:11 AM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix@tools.ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org; 'IETF'; me Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-claise

GenART LC review of draft-ietf-nea-pt-tls-05

2012-06-04 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2012-6-4 IETF LC End Date: 2012-6-13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 3.2 Therefore, this specification requests the IANA reserve a TCP port number

RE: GenART LC review of draft-ietf-nea-pt-tls-05

2012-06-19 Thread Roni Even
should be specified since it appears as Reserved in the registry. I have no specific suggestion Roni From: Paul Sangster [mailto:paul_sangs...@symantec.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 13, 2012 7:56 PM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-nea-pt-tls@tools.ietf.org Cc: 'IETF'; gen-...@ietf.org; n

GenART LC review of draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page-02

2012-06-28 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-6-28 IETF LC End Date: 2012-7-13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In the section 2 the second sentence is The initial content for the Tao web page will come from

GenART LC review of draft-ietf-ipfix-ie-doctors-03

2012-07-15 Thread Roni Even
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ipfix-ie-doctors-03. Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-7-15 IETF LC End Date: 2012-7-17 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication

genART review of draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix-09

2012-07-15 Thread Roni Even
-in-ipfix-09 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-7-15 IETF LC End Date: 2012-7-19 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues:

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rfc5787bis-05

2012-08-13 Thread Roni Even
. Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-8-12 IETF LC End Date: 2012-8-17 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In section 6.1 If specified more than once, instances preceding the first

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