Re: [Lsr] IPR Poll for "IGP extension for PCEP security capability support in the PCE discovery" (Corrected)

2018-12-06 Thread Dhruv Dhody
I am unaware of any IPR, apart from the one disclosed [1]. Regards, Dhruv BTW the WG adopted I-D [2] is already posted, but I wanted to make sure that my response is archived on the list. [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/3351/ [2]

Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09

2019-10-03 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Peter, Snipping to open points... > > (1) Please use updated requirement language text as per RFC 8174, as you do > > have a mix of upper-case and lower-case terms in your I-D. > > > >The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL > >NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD

Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13

2020-05-06 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Peter, Thanks for your reply, snipping to points that need further discussion... > What about: > > Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane relies on Interior Gateway > Protocols (IGP) such as OSPFv2 [RFC8665] and OSPFv3 [RFC8666] to signal > labels. > Much better. > > (3) Section 4 > > >

Re: [Lsr] FW: New Version Notification for draft-wang-lsr-passive-interface-attribute-04.txt

2020-10-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Gyan, As far as PCE is concerned, we have the inter-AS link information via RFC 5316 and RFC 5392. Both of these include a section on PCE's BRPC procedure for instance. I see you have other use cases, but it would be good to highlight why for the PCE use case the above is deficient. Thanks!

Re: [Lsr] FW: New Version Notification for draft-wang-lsr-passive-interface-attribute-04.txt

2020-10-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Aijun, I am not particularly sold on the argument that the configuration requirements of RFC 5316/RFC 5392 are especially burdensome. A PCE relies on the TEDB which comprises nodes & links, and it makes sense to have an inter-AS link represented as a "Link". Moreover, these links are

Re: [Lsr] More responses required [Re: WG adoption call for draft-acee-lsr-isis-yang-augmentation-v1-03]

2021-01-25 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Chris, I support adoption. But I found the use of "version 1" in the title a bit weird. Every time we add new features, we would have to name the I-Ds as version 2,3..; IMHO it would be distracting. Should we just name the features instead, something like - "IS-IS YANG Model Augmentations for

Re: [Lsr] [Teas] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis

2021-03-03 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi, I went through the diff with RFC5316. The changes look good. Some minor comments - (1) Is it wise to use normative keywords MUST and SHOULD in the appendix? The text is from section 3.1 but can it be reworded in the appendix? Also wondering if other changes (IANA, nits) could be listed or we

Re: [Lsr] WG Last Call IPR Poll for IGP extension for PCEP security capability support in the PCE discovery - draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-05

2021-07-21 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Acee, I am not aware of any other IPR that applies to this I-D. Thanks! Dhruv On Wed, Jul 21, 2021 at 10:07 PM Acee Lindem (acee) wrote: > The following IPR has been filed for > draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support: > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/3351/ > > > > Are you

Re: [Lsr] WG last call for draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-00

2022-06-23 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi WG, I support progressing this towards publication. Some comments - - The header and main body claim that 7 RFCs are being updated whereas the abstract and introduction only cite two. - It is good to add an informational reference for inclusive language in the introduction -- may be

Re: [Lsr] AD review of draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-09

2022-08-25 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Qin, John, I have added my comments for two issues, please see inline (look for Dhruv:) On Thu, Aug 25, 2022 at 2:52 PM Qin Wu wrote: > Hi, John: > > Thanks for your valuable AD review. We have incorporate your comments into > draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-10. > > Regarding

Re: [Lsr] Working Group Last Call for "OSPFv3 Extensions for SRv6" - draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-srv6-extensions-06.txt (Corrected Address)

2022-08-22 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi, I support WG LC. It is in good shape! It might be a good idea to include some text (perhaps in the appendix) on why a new LSA is used for SRv6 Locator LSA. Any reviewer and future reader would wonder why this decison was made. BTW, do expand LSA on first use. Thanks! Dhruv On Fri, Jul 29,

Re: [Lsr] Lars Eggert's Discuss on draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-10-05 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi all, I have incorporated changes suggested by Les and Acee in the working copy maintained at - TXT - https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/master/draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-12.txt DIFF -

Re: [Lsr] Robert Wilton's Discuss on draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-10-05 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Robert, Thanks for your review. The working copy is at - TXT - https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/master/draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-12.txt DIFF -

Re: [Lsr] [Pce] Lars Eggert's Discuss on draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-10-05 Thread Dhruv Dhody
; > > > > > > > Hi Dhruv, > > Thanks for the quick turnaround. It looks good to me. One nit, I believe > a period was added to “However, as noted in [RFC6952].,” by mistake. > > Thanks, > > Acee > > > > From: Lsr on behalf of Dhruv Dhody < &g

Re: [Lsr] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-11: (with COMMENT)

2022-10-06 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Eric, Thanks for your review. The working copy is at - TXT - https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/master/draft-ietf- lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-12.txt DIFF - https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-

Re: [Lsr] [Pce] Lars Eggert's Discuss on draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-10-06 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi John, Disclaimer is removed from working copy! Thanks! Dhruv On Wed, Oct 5, 2022 at 11:51 PM John Scudder wrote: > Silly me, > > > On Oct 5, 2022, at 2:17 PM, John Scudder wrote: > > > > see that warning from idnits pretty often too, I don’t know what > triggers it, > > … it’s right

Re: [Lsr] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-11: (with COMMENT)

2022-10-06 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Warren, Thanks for your review. Apologies for making you sad (we definitely don't want that :)! How about this text instead of removing -> 6. Management Considerations Manageability considerations for PCE Discovery are addressed in Section 4.10 of [RFC4674] and Section 9 of [RFC5088]

Re: [Lsr] [Pce] Paul Wouters' No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-12: (with COMMENT)

2022-10-10 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Paul, On Tue, Oct 11, 2022 at 6:35 AM Paul Wouters via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Paul Wouters has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-12: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all

Re: [Lsr] [Pce] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-12

2022-10-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Carlos, Thanks for your review! On Tue, Oct 11, 2022 at 7:38 PM Carlos Pignataro via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro > Review result: Ready with Nits > > This document defines a mechanism (flags and sub-TLV) to advertise via the > PCE > Protocol security

Re: [Lsr] IETF 118 LSR Minutes

2023-11-27 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Acee/Les, Seems to be a known issue, See https://github.com/ietf-tools/datatracker/issues/5952 Perhaps we can comment there asking the tools team to prioritize its resolution! Thanks! Dhruv On Mon, Nov 27, 2023 at 5:18 AM Acee Lindem wrote: > Les - > The LSR WG list is no place to vent on

[Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-08

2019-09-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Issues Subject: RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-08 Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft. ​https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc/ The routing directorate will, on request

[Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09

2019-09-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Issues Subject: RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09 Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft. ​https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc/ The routing directorate will, on request

[Lsr] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12

2020-05-05 Thread Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Issues Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request

[Lsr] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13

2020-05-05 Thread Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Issues Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request