Hi WG,

I support progressing this towards publication.

Some comments -

- The header and main body claim that 7 RFCs are being updated whereas the
abstract and introduction only cite two.
- It is good to add an informational reference for inclusive language in
the introduction -- may be NISTIR8366 (which is referred to in the IESG
statement on inclusive language)

Thanks!
Dhruv


On Sun, Jun 5, 2022 at 3:25 PM Christian Hopps <[email protected]> wrote:

> Given the simplicity of this document and having received no objections or
> edits prior to or during the adoption call we'll be moving it immediately
> to WGLC...
>
> This begins a 2 week WG Last Call, ending Jun 19th, 2022, for:
>
>   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology/
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> Chris.
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