The one on the right, has more rain and wet feel to it.
Dave
On Sat, Apr 5, 2008 at 12:58 AM, David Savage [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
G'day All,
Earlier Godfrey posted his triptych, it just so happens I've recently
put together a diptych (~170kb)
The first one (on the left) is somewhat compromised by the composition
and the breaking of the frame in my opinion. The 2nd, however, is
really excellent - I love the clarity, the freshness and the very wet
feel you have caught. That splash (forgive the pun) of colour lifts
it.
Bob
I think you've summed up quite nicely my own feelings.
I had to crop the LHS quite severely to get ride of an annoying BG
feature that I couldn't seem to get rid of in camera. But it's not
quite right
Anyway it was a fun project to shoot.
Thanks for your thoughts.
Cheers,
Dave
On Sat, Apr
Dave,
The teacher of photographic composition in my third year of photography
school told a story that is apt for your diptych. He took a locally
successful exhibition to China in the '70s, but at its first showing it got
a disappointing reception. Upon investigation he found that the pictures
I can see how it could be confusing.
The leaking tank in the right most frame is for rain water collection.
It's about 4' high on a 1' plinth.
The shot on the left is the downpipe from the roof guttering over the
top of the tank which supplies the rain water.
:-)
So the sequence is correct,
,
Anthony Farr
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I can see how it could be confusing.
The leaking tank in the right most
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