On May 26, 2011, at 10:36 AM, Ole Troan wrote:
I like the draft and I think it covers the motivational points well.
as a general comment, I do think the document is too wordy. could the authors
make the next revision terser or do you want me to propose text changes?
I would also suggest
Dear Ole,
For sure, the text can be shortened whenever possible.
If you point me to sections you think it need to be re-worded, this would be
appreciated.
Thank you.
Cheers,
Med
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On May 26, 2011, at 10:36 AM, Ole Troan wrote:
I like the draft and I think it covers the motivational points well.
as a general comment, I do think the document is too wordy. could the
authors make the next revision terser or do you want me to propose text
changes?
I would
