Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-08-01 Thread Jason McIntyre
On Mon, Jul 29, 2019 at 09:52:48PM -0700, Evan Silberman wrote: > "T.J. Townsend" wrote: > > > + You may individually select distribution sets to install > > > + by entering their names or wildcards (e.g. `*.tgz' or > > > + `base*|comp*'), or you may enter `all' to select

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-29 Thread Evan Silberman
"T.J. Townsend" wrote: > > + You may individually select distribution sets to install > > + by entering their names or wildcards (e.g. `*.tgz' or > > + `base*|comp*'), or you may enter `all' to select all the > > + sets (which is what most users will want

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-27 Thread Evan Silberman
"Theo de Raadt" wrote: > Evan Silberman wrote: > > > - You may now be given the opportunity to configure the time zone > > - your system will be using (this depends on the installation > > - media you are using). > > - > > - If the installation program skips this question, do not be > >

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-27 Thread Theo de Raadt
Evan Silberman wrote: > - You may now be given the opportunity to configure the time zone > - your system will be using (this depends on the installation > - media you are using). > - > - If the installation program skips this question, do not be > - alarmed, the time zone

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-27 Thread Evan Silberman
Jason McIntyre wrote: > ok. so if i didn't comment on a change, i didn;t see any issue. > if it's a rewording of an already ok text, i don;t see the point. > i don;t see the point of Un*x->Unix, but some of our more, er, > experienced, developers may want to chip in. Hi Jason & tech@, Below is

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-09 Thread Tim Kuijsten
Ian McWilliam wrote: > Isn't Unix a trademark of the Open Group? Hence the usage of Unix-like or > Un*x.. That trademark is UNIX, all caps. According to [APUEv3]: "The Open Group owns the UNIX trademark and uses the Single UNIX Specification to define the interfaces an implementation must

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-09 Thread Jason McIntyre
On Mon, Jul 08, 2019 at 11:56:58PM -0700, Evan Silberman wrote: > Jason McIntyre wrote: > > On Tue, Jul 09, 2019 at 07:43:50AM +0200, Otto Moerbeek wrote: > > > On Mon, Jul 08, 2019 at 10:26:57AM -0700, Evan Silberman wrote: > > > > > > I don't know our stance on Unix vs Un*x. I'll leave this to

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-09 Thread Evan Silberman
Ian McWilliam wrote: > Isn't Unix a trademark of the Open Group? Hence the usage of Unix-like or > Un*x.. Yeah I have no complaint with "Unix-like". I'm happy to learn about the historical reasons for writing "Un*x". If it's to be suggestive of variants, that makes a little bit of sense, though

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-09 Thread Evan Silberman
Jason McIntyre wrote: > On Tue, Jul 09, 2019 at 07:43:50AM +0200, Otto Moerbeek wrote: > > On Mon, Jul 08, 2019 at 10:26:57AM -0700, Evan Silberman wrote: > > > > I don't know our stance on Unix vs Un*x. I'll leave this to some > > native speaker, like jmc@ who knows all about commas (and much

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-09 Thread Ian McWilliam
Isn't Unix a trademark of the Open Group? Hence the usage of Unix-like or Un*x.. Ian McWilliam From: owner-t...@openbsd.org on behalf of Jason McIntyre Sent: Tuesday, 9 July 2019 4:14 PM To: tech@openbsd.org Subject: Re: Grammar and style edits

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-09 Thread Jason McIntyre
On Tue, Jul 09, 2019 at 07:43:50AM +0200, Otto Moerbeek wrote: > On Mon, Jul 08, 2019 at 10:26:57AM -0700, Evan Silberman wrote: > > I don't know our stance on Unix vs Un*x. I'll leave this to some > native speaker, like jmc@ who knows all about commas (and much more) > :-) > > -Otto >

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-08 Thread Otto Moerbeek
On Mon, Jul 08, 2019 at 10:26:57AM -0700, Evan Silberman wrote: I don't know our stance on Unix vs Un*x. I'll leave this to some native speaker, like jmc@ who knows all about commas (and much more) :-) -Otto I'll leave this to jmc or some other native speaker. S > Otto Moerbeek wrote:

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-08 Thread Evan Silberman
Otto Moerbeek wrote: > On Sun, Jul 07, 2019 at 10:44:42PM -0700, Evan Silberman wrote: > > > I noticed one thing that bothered me and decided to look for other > > things that bothered me. Changes were made without reference to the code > > of the installation program and without checking that

Re: Grammar and style edits to installation guide

2019-07-07 Thread Otto Moerbeek
On Sun, Jul 07, 2019 at 10:44:42PM -0700, Evan Silberman wrote: > I noticed one thing that bothered me and decided to look for other > things that bothered me. Changes were made without reference to the code > of the installation program and without checking that the installer > behaves as