Draft: draft-ietf-sip-session-policy-framework-01 Reviewer: Mary Barnes Review Date: 8 June 2007 Review Deadline: 11 June 2007 Status: WGLC
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: ---------- I reviewed the diff for this document as compared to the version I previously reviewed: http://www.softarmor.com/sipping/process/wg-review/reviews/draft-ietf-si pping-session-policy-framework-01-barnes.txt And, I believe all my previous concerns have been addressed. There are a few nits that I noticed that should be fixed. Nits: ------ - Header: Need to add "Intended Status:" (i.e., category="std" in the <rfc> field) - Section 4.4.1: - 2nd paragraph, 5th sentence: insert "the" between "using" and "mechanism" in the following sentence: "If the UAC decides to continue, it MUST use the policy server URI to contact the policy server using the mechanism defined in Section 4.5." - 2nd paragraph, 8th sentence: "resend" -> "resent" in the following sentence: "If no changes are required by policies or no policies have been received, the request can be resend without any policy-induced changes." _______________________________________________ Sip mailing list https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sip This list is for NEW development of the core SIP Protocol Use [EMAIL PROTECTED] for questions on current sip Use [EMAIL PROTECTED] for new developments on the application of sip
