Re: [Sip] Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07I apologize for this post in
advance (lowest added value post to this mailing list in some time), but
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-editor/instructions2authors.txt
says
B. Basic Formatting | 3.1
|
o Only printable ASCII characters | 3.1(1),
| 3.1(4)
o No lines exceeding 72 characters | 3.1(2)
[This is especially important for "as is" tables |
and figures, which cannot be easily reformatted by|
the RFC Editor.]
Thanks,
Spencer
----- Original Message -----
From: Attila Sipos
To: Francois Audet ; Christer Holmberg ; [email protected]
Sent: Tuesday, April 07, 2009 2:16 PM
Subject: Re: [Sip] Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07
Francois' comment about the diagram
also brought to my attention the fact that figure 3
is probably "illegal" for RFCs - isn't there usually
an 80 character line-length limit?
Anyway, I've "re-drawn" figure 3 and removed
the word "leg" - this can obviously be made
clear with an explanation.
UAC P1 P2 UAS_2 UAS_3 UAS_4
--- INVITE--->
--- INVITE (2) ------------------->
--- INVITE ----->
--- INVITE (3) ------------>
--- INVITE (4) --------------------->
<-- 18x (3) ----------------
<-- 18x (3) -----
<-- 18x (3) --
<-- 18x (4) -------------------------
<-- 18x (4) -----
<-- 18x (4) --
<-- 4xx (3) ----------------
--- ACK (3) --------------->
<-- 4xx (4) -------------------------
--- ACK (4) ------------------------>
<-- 4xx (3) ----
--- ACK (3) --->
<-- 199 (3) --
<-- 199 (4) --
<-- 200 (2) ----------------------
<-- 200 (2) --
--- ACK (2) ->
--- ACK (2) --------------------->
Only issue now is that this makes figure 3 inconsistent with the others.
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From: [email protected] on behalf of Francois Audet
Sent: Tue 07/04/2009 18:16
To: Christer Holmberg; [email protected]
Subject: Re: [Sip] Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07
Minor comment: It would improve readability of the Figures if the vertical
bars where ]
included in the pictures.
________________________________
From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of
Christer Holmberg
Sent: Wednesday, April 01, 2009 00:31
To: [email protected]
Subject: [Sip] Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07
Hi,
I have put together a new version (-07) of the 199 draft, based on
the latest discussions.
The changes are in chapters 5 (new note added) and 6 (text
simplified). 100rel and SDP o/a impacts have also been added to chapters 5 and
6 (I have still kept chapters 9 and 10, though).
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sip-199-07.txt
<http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sip-199-07.txt>
Regards,
Christer
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