Dear authors, I volunteered yesterday at the Softwires IETF 82 meeting to be one of the reviewers of your draft. I reviewed it and I am sending the link to the PDF which includes all the proposed changes and my comments. I also tried to address some typos and grammar mistakes, but I since I am not a native speaker, some of those fixes could be wrong too.
I hope you don't mind the PDF format of the review, it just seemed to be the easiest way for me to do this. http://nejc.skoberne.net/transfer/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1104483/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf (backup link) Regards, Nejc _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
