Thank you for the quick review! Hope to see the other 2 reviews coming soon.
Alain. Sent from my iPad On Nov 15, 2011, at 5:15 AM, "Nejc Škoberne" <[email protected]> wrote: > Dear authors, > > I volunteered yesterday at the Softwires IETF 82 meeting to be one of > the reviewers of your draft. I reviewed it and I am sending the link > to the PDF which includes all the proposed changes and my comments. I > also tried to address some typos and grammar mistakes, but I since I > am not a native speaker, some of those fixes could be wrong too. > > I hope you don't mind the PDF format of the review, it just seemed to > be the easiest way for me to do this. > > http://nejc.skoberne.net/transfer/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf > http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1104483/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf (backup link) > > Regards, > Nejc > _______________________________________________ > Softwires mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
