Hi Nejc, Thanks so much for the review. The PDF format works very well. We will make the changes according to your suggestion in the next revision.
Thanks, Yiu On 11/14/11 4:15 PM, "Nejc Škoberne" <[email protected]> wrote: >Dear authors, > >I volunteered yesterday at the Softwires IETF 82 meeting to be one of >the reviewers of your draft. I reviewed it and I am sending the link >to the PDF which includes all the proposed changes and my comments. I >also tried to address some typos and grammar mistakes, but I since I >am not a native speaker, some of those fixes could be wrong too. > >I hope you don't mind the PDF format of the review, it just seemed to >be the easiest way for me to do this. > >http://nejc.skoberne.net/transfer/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf >http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1104483/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf (backup >link) > >Regards, >Nejc >_______________________________________________ >Softwires mailing list >[email protected] >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
