Hi, I’ve just posted v06 with the changes proposed below incorporated.
Thanks, Ian > On 29. Jun 2018, at 10:20, <[email protected]> > <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Ian, > > Works for me. Thanks. > > Cheers, > Med > > De : [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] > Envoyé : vendredi 29 juin 2018 09:59 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN; Sheng Jiang > Cc : Softwires WG; [email protected]; Andy Wingo > Objet : Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang-04 as Standard > Track, closed by 27 June 2018 > > Hi Sheng /Med, > > @Sheng, Thanks for the review. > @Med, Thanks for the quick update. > > A couple of other things: > > There’s an outstanding comment on model element descriptions given as “…”. > Proposed new text: > > notification softwire-binding-instance-event description: "The ID of the > binding-instance that generated the notification."; > > leaf-list modified-entry description "The ID of the the binding-table entry > that has been modified."; > > ------ > I just did a quick read through of -05. There are a few small language > cleanups that I would like to make: > > Section 2.1 > s/Provides configuration and monitoring for softwire CE element/Provides > configuration and monitoring for the softwire CE element/ > > s/Provides configuration and monitoring for softwire BR element/Provides > configuration and monitoring for the softwire BR element/ > > Section 2.2 > s/be imported here, as needed/be imported, as needed/ > > ietf-softwire-ce:binding-entry/br-ipv6-addr > description > s/The IPv6 address for of the binding BR./The IPv6 address for the binding > BR./ > > ietf-softwire-br:br-instances/algorithm > description > s/Indicate that the instance supports the MAP-E and MAP-T functions./Indicate > that the instance supports the MAP-E and MAP-T functions./ > > If there’s no objection to the above changes, I’ll update and post later on > today. > > Cheers, > Ian > > > On 27. Jun 2018, at 10:54, [email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Sheng, > > Many thanks for the careful review. > > An updated version which integrates your comments is available > online:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-yang/?include_text=1 > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-yang/?include_text=1> > > See more inline. > > Cheers, > Med > _______________________________________________ > Softwires mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
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