--- Begin Message --- (OOC: Just a note---I assumed she had followed us in cuz I said David sat between
her and Stark...need me to rewrite?)
(OOC: Pete, if you want to rewrite defining where he sat, that is fine. I don't think it is super important to the way things are going to go, though. I made a little adjustment that moved Joanna out of the sentence, but feel free to adjust to your flavor.)
> Stark started heading toward the door. "We should get a move on. The
> Admiral is not the nicest person to be around if you show up late."
>
> David didn't like it one bit but he followed orders and leftwith Stark and
> Kirk.
>
> Stark took them to Van Der Loo's office suite. The receptionist was at the
> desk and indicated that they could go right into the Admiral's office.
>
> He was seated at his desk going over some PADDs when they arrived. He
> looked up as his office door shushed open. He was clearly surprised, and a
> little annoyed, to see that Stark was not alone, particularly considering
> who the people were. "How can I help you follks?" he asked.
>
> David took a seat next to Stark-he froze his emotions, "Captain
> Boulay and Commander Kirk reporting as ordered by Admiral Jackson, sir. It
> was requested that we sit in on your briefing."
>
> The Counselor stood near the door. She had followed Stark into the room,
> but she was willing to wait to be introducted to the Admiral once again
> before becoming the center of attention.
Dieter Van Der Loo's eyes glanced up at their entrance, though he did not adjust the angle of his head. He was surprised to see that Stark had brought company with them. After eying them for a moment, he tossed the PADD in his hand onto the table. "I am pleased to hear that Admiral Jackson is comfortable enough to order people into one of my meetings."
(Anyone taking the bait?)
AJ
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