Bernd Fondermann wrote: > Two smaller nitpickings for section 1. ... > > "with the negotiation being completed XMPP" - for my > english-as-a-foreign-language ears a word or two seems to be missing > after 'completed'. maybe "over", "using" or "inside"? > > "but building in support for these features" - I am very unsure about > 'building in'. it sounds strange to me in this context, "built-in" > sounded better.
Clarified (I hope): http://svn.xmpp.org:18080/browse/XMPP/trunk/extensions/xep-0166.xml?r1=1420&r2=1426 Peter -- Peter Saint-Andre https://stpeter.im/
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